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Kali_Namir · Posted 08-08-2012, 12:44 AM

Me too! Then I could set up my charity and get started and stuffs...

Thinking of starting a writers thread for my poems and random musings...

Serra Britt · Posted 08-08-2012, 12:53 AM

If you do poems you should...Suzerain does that too with his poetry.

Kali_Namir · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:01 AM

I'm about to, but there are a whole lot of them. So I may only put one up a day...

Serra Britt · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:03 AM

I can't guarantee I'll read them, but I'm sure some people will ;)

Kali_Namir · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:09 AM

It's okay. I mean they're kind of dark and depressing, but some of them have a more uplifting idea to them.

Serra Britt · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:11 AM

Dark and depressing don't bother me much. So speaking I did read the one you just put up and it's...well yes dark and depressing. It read well except for two spots and I could feel the message too.

Kali_Namir · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:11 AM

What spots?

Serra Britt · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:16 AM

Fifth verse seemed like it didn't have enough syllables, and the last verse didn't exactly rhyme, but I only noticed because everything else flowed so well.

Kali_Namir · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:20 AM

Yeah I see what you mean about the 5th, but not sure how to fix it...

The last verse I actually started it with a rhyme, and it had a greater effect without. Like it sounded like it had more of a bang in the end.

Serra Britt · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:26 AM

I was kind of thinking that, like "This is all screwed up because of YOU" kind of message.

Maybe make the line "out from my arm" ? Seemed to work fine in my head at least.

Kali_Namir · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:32 AM

It was definitely an all because of you idea. Idk. I may end up keeping it the way it is just because it was the first one I did.

Serra Britt · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:33 AM

I think it's fine really ^^;; And if it is the first one you did all the more reason to not change it.

Seeing how late it is, maybe you should go to bed :p

Kali_Namir · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:37 AM

I probably should, but I'll just end up playing games on my phone, and I need to get used to less sleep anyways.

Serra Britt · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:39 AM

Wow I have a dirty mind, you said that and I instantly thought of something...well...probably inappropriate to put here XD

Kali_Namir · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:42 AM

Probably not too inappropriate, I mean me and Hyjin to sleep together during the school year...

Serra Britt · Posted 08-08-2012, 01:50 AM

That is entirely the thought I had that would keep you awake :p Well, with all the extra tidbits.

Kali_Namir Dinos go RAWR!!!			#9569
	Me too! Then I could set up my charity and get started and stuffs... Thinking of starting a writers thread for my poems and random musings... Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes.
		Posted 08-08-2012, 12:44 AM

		#9570	Serra Britt Neko-chan Nya Nya~
If you do poems you should...Suzerain does that too with his poetry. ♥ Never be afraid to be yourself ♥ Want to see my art or webcomic? Serra's Art Gallery A Neko's Quest \| My Closet Kitsune's Haven Image courtesty of tsukiko
	Posted 08-08-2012, 12:53 AM

Kali_Namir Dinos go RAWR!!!			#9571
	I'm about to, but there are a whole lot of them. So I may only put one up a day... Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes.
		Posted 08-08-2012, 01:01 AM

		#9572	Serra Britt Neko-chan Nya Nya~
I can't guarantee I'll read them, but I'm sure some people will ;) ♥ Never be afraid to be yourself ♥ Want to see my art or webcomic? Serra's Art Gallery A Neko's Quest \| My Closet Kitsune's Haven Image courtesty of tsukiko
	Posted 08-08-2012, 01:03 AM

Kali_Namir Dinos go RAWR!!!			#9573
	It's okay. I mean they're kind of dark and depressing, but some of them have a more uplifting idea to them. Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes.
		Posted 08-08-2012, 01:09 AM

		#9574	Serra Britt Neko-chan Nya Nya~
Dark and depressing don't bother me much. So speaking I did read the one you just put up and it's...well yes dark and depressing. It read well except for two spots and I could feel the message too. ♥ Never be afraid to be yourself ♥ Want to see my art or webcomic? Serra's Art Gallery A Neko's Quest \| My Closet Kitsune's Haven Image courtesty of tsukiko
	Posted 08-08-2012, 01:11 AM

Kali_Namir Dinos go RAWR!!!			#9575
	What spots? Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes.
		Posted 08-08-2012, 01:11 AM

		#9576	Serra Britt Neko-chan Nya Nya~
Fifth verse seemed like it didn't have enough syllables, and the last verse didn't exactly rhyme, but I only noticed because everything else flowed so well. ♥ Never be afraid to be yourself ♥ Want to see my art or webcomic? Serra's Art Gallery A Neko's Quest \| My Closet Kitsune's Haven Image courtesty of tsukiko
	Posted 08-08-2012, 01:16 AM

Kali_Namir Dinos go RAWR!!!			#9577
	Yeah I see what you mean about the 5th, but not sure how to fix it... The last verse I actually started it with a rhyme, and it had a greater effect without. Like it sounded like it had more of a bang in the end. Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes.
		Posted 08-08-2012, 01:20 AM

		#9578	Serra Britt Neko-chan Nya Nya~
I was kind of thinking that, like "This is all screwed up because of YOU" kind of message. Maybe make the line "out from my arm" ? Seemed to work fine in my head at least. ♥ Never be afraid to be yourself ♥ Want to see my art or webcomic? Serra's Art Gallery A Neko's Quest \| My Closet Kitsune's Haven Image courtesty of tsukiko
	Posted 08-08-2012, 01:26 AM

Kali_Namir Dinos go RAWR!!!			#9579
	It was definitely an all because of you idea. Idk. I may end up keeping it the way it is just because it was the first one I did. Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes.
		Posted 08-08-2012, 01:32 AM

		#9580	Serra Britt Neko-chan Nya Nya~
I think it's fine really ^^;; And if it is the first one you did all the more reason to not change it. Seeing how late it is, maybe you should go to bed :p ♥ Never be afraid to be yourself ♥ Want to see my art or webcomic? Serra's Art Gallery A Neko's Quest \| My Closet Kitsune's Haven Image courtesty of tsukiko
	Posted 08-08-2012, 01:33 AM

Kali_Namir Dinos go RAWR!!!			#9581
	I probably should, but I'll just end up playing games on my phone, and I need to get used to less sleep anyways. Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes.
		Posted 08-08-2012, 01:37 AM

		#9582	Serra Britt Neko-chan Nya Nya~
Wow I have a dirty mind, you said that and I instantly thought of something...well...probably inappropriate to put here XD ♥ Never be afraid to be yourself ♥ Want to see my art or webcomic? Serra's Art Gallery A Neko's Quest \| My Closet Kitsune's Haven Image courtesty of tsukiko
	Posted 08-08-2012, 01:39 AM

Kali_Namir Dinos go RAWR!!!			#9583
	Probably not too inappropriate, I mean me and Hyjin to sleep together during the school year... Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes.
		Posted 08-08-2012, 01:42 AM

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		#9584	Serra Britt Neko-chan Nya Nya~
That is entirely the thought I had that would keep you awake :p Well, with all the extra tidbits. ♥ Never be afraid to be yourself ♥ Want to see my art or webcomic? Serra's Art Gallery A Neko's Quest \| My Closet Kitsune's Haven Image courtesty of tsukiko
	Posted 08-08-2012, 01:50 AM