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Kali_Namir
Dinos go RAWR!!!
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Me too! Then I could set up my charity and get started and stuffs...
Thinking of starting a writers thread for my poems and random musings... Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes. | ||||
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 12:44 AM |
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Serra Britt
Neko-chan Nya Nya~
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If you do poems you should...Suzerain does that too with his poetry.
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 12:53 AM |
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Kali_Namir
Dinos go RAWR!!!
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I'm about to, but there are a whole lot of them. So I may only put one up a day...
Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes. | ||||
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 01:01 AM |
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Serra Britt
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I can't guarantee I'll read them, but I'm sure some people will ;)
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 01:03 AM |
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Kali_Namir
Dinos go RAWR!!!
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It's okay. I mean they're kind of dark and depressing, but some of them have a more uplifting idea to them.
Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes. | ||||
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 01:09 AM |
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Serra Britt
Neko-chan Nya Nya~
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Dark and depressing don't bother me much. So speaking I did read the one you just put up and it's...well yes dark and depressing. It read well except for two spots and I could feel the message too.
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 01:11 AM |
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Kali_Namir
Dinos go RAWR!!!
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What spots?
Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes. | ||||
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 01:11 AM |
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Serra Britt
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Fifth verse seemed like it didn't have enough syllables, and the last verse didn't exactly rhyme, but I only noticed because everything else flowed so well.
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 01:16 AM |
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Kali_Namir
Dinos go RAWR!!!
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Yeah I see what you mean about the 5th, but not sure how to fix it...
The last verse I actually started it with a rhyme, and it had a greater effect without. Like it sounded like it had more of a bang in the end. Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes. | ||||
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 01:20 AM |
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Serra Britt
Neko-chan Nya Nya~
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I was kind of thinking that, like "This is all screwed up because of YOU" kind of message.
Maybe make the line "out from my arm" ? Seemed to work fine in my head at least. ![]() ♥ Never be afraid to be yourself ♥ Want to see my art or webcomic? Serra's Art Gallery A Neko's Quest | My Closet Kitsune's Haven Image courtesty of tsukiko | ||||
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 01:26 AM |
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Kali_Namir
Dinos go RAWR!!!
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It was definitely an all because of you idea. Idk. I may end up keeping it the way it is just because it was the first one I did.
Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes. | ||||
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 01:32 AM |
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Serra Britt
Neko-chan Nya Nya~
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I think it's fine really ^^;; And if it is the first one you did all the more reason to not change it.
Seeing how late it is, maybe you should go to bed :p ![]() ♥ Never be afraid to be yourself ♥ Want to see my art or webcomic? Serra's Art Gallery A Neko's Quest | My Closet Kitsune's Haven Image courtesty of tsukiko | ||||
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 01:33 AM |
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Kali_Namir
Dinos go RAWR!!!
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I probably should, but I'll just end up playing games on my phone, and I need to get used to less sleep anyways.
Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes. | ||||
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 01:37 AM |
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Serra Britt
Neko-chan Nya Nya~
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Wow I have a dirty mind, you said that and I instantly thought of something...well...probably inappropriate to put here XD
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 01:39 AM |
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Kali_Namir
Dinos go RAWR!!!
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Probably not too inappropriate, I mean me and Hyjin to sleep together during the school year...
Sign My Siggy!!!...I Dare You!...PS...Luffles to all who do!!! le sign ;3-signs more ;P -signs- Love, Ulti♥ owo~ -this is my signature- <3 Lacry Lucid was here. No. Yes. | ||||
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 01:42 AM |
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Serra Britt
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That is entirely the thought I had that would keep you awake :p Well, with all the extra tidbits.
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| Posted 08-08-2012, 01:50 AM |
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