[littl3chocobo]

yeah...it makes me feel so stupid too because it is usually something that when you notice it it just sorta /clicks/

[littl3chocobo]

though here is a distraction to get rid of the bad taste of the last one; http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z...range/zosa.png

[Daring Scylla]

I GOT IT
there's a little too much headspace from the tip of his head to the top of the picture, and the weird framething on the left takes away from the picture, because of the color. if it were a little darker or lighter ( i think lighter) it would probably blend better.

[littl3chocobo]

it was funky before that, the bg was a means of correcting the issue

[Daring Scylla]

I can see it being funky without it too
gimme some minutes

[littl3chocobo]

i think it's just his lumpy head :\

[littl3chocobo]

i mean, his eyes are so big they never look right anyway and the round of his nose only works with his head tipped a bit more and the haircut looks terrible when it's not in the braid

[Daring Scylla]

The eyes are definitely messing it up
I actually think it's the entire head now that you mention it
it doesn't sit right within the picture
i still think you should add some colour contrast among the sheets and whatnot

[Daring Scylla]

THERE WE GO
the far side of his face is what's bothering me! it's a little too thin and doesn't accomodate for his cheekbones and right eye
it makes the head too narrow

[littl3chocobo]

ja, though no editing, it's a done thing unless i get too weird, though here is a not failure art of him;
http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z...mp8ocxx-14.png

[littl3chocobo]

oh.....well damn, you were really close and can have your art anyway, the right is fine, if you follow the neck that is how it is /supposed/ to be but look at the left, it's way too far over it's nearly front-facing

[Daring Scylla]

I guess that may help too
whatever fixes it
haha i'm no use if its not my art lol

[littl3chocobo]

tell me what you want drawn and i'll work on it in the morning when i wake up<3

[Daring Scylla]

Awww thank you C:
but I don't need art
I just wanna chat or something

[littl3chocobo]

i can try and stay awake a little longer

[Daring Scylla]

If you want to, I'm not keeping you up
besides Im rping with some people right now
except its not going too well +_______+