[littl3chocobo]

yucky but well, what is causing the pissiness? anything i can help with?

meh~ edit or not good timing XD

[Daring Scylla]

/rolls in
hi everyone

[Reyoki]

Oh, there are many contributing factors to my ever-present pissy mood. Family drama is a big part of it, though; trust me, you don't want to get me started. Today there was an overabundance of immaturity on another site I frequent, too.

[littl3chocobo]

hi sweetie<3


did you get to knock any heads together at least?

[Daring Scylla]

I hope I'm not coming in at a super awkward time
but
internet immaturity happens
i'm sorry to hear it happened to you D:

[Reyoki]

@Choco: No, but I did complain to the thread owner for not properly micro-managing. He'd stated that it was to be a PG thread, but things were delving into the NC-17 zone... and he was a part of it.

@Darling: Yes, unfortunately it does. I don't say anything about it most of the time and just let the anger from it fester inside until I start feeling particularly... creative. That's when I draw my best art.

[littl3chocobo]

so if i want pretty arts i have to be mean to you?

[Daring Scylla]

art is good :0
use your anger to channel and make great art
do you mind me asking which site this was? if so feel free to ignore the question

[littl3chocobo]

scaylla is a teacher(enough) can he give me constructive crit on a picture? reyoki too if she'd like, there is something terribly....off about it and all the technical errors i find are not what is doing it

[Daring Scylla]

I can : ) i teach german and english though lol

[littl3chocobo]

i just need someone who won't crow about the 'glorious amazingness' of it just because i am the one drawing it |:[

i know it's shit and a failed art i just need to know /why/ it bothers me so much to look at it;
http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z.../lapland-4.png

[Daring Scylla]

hok
lets do this
first off, good things: I like the concept. composition is pretty decent - there's not a ton of white space or clutter or garbage ruining. colors contrast fairly well though i'd definitely put more darks in teh sheets/pillow
the bad: something about his face is off, i think it's the eye closest to us and the ear is a bit too far forward. the eyebrows bother me too, they seem too small and close together. the right hand facing us looks awkward and should probably be given a little more depth and the pillows its on need to squish more
moving on the the hair the way it drapes over his body gets weird, like when its falling over his shoulder it seems like there should be more hair up top to constitute the amount falling from his arm
right ankle, one closest to us should prolly be thinner, and slope the leg a bit more.
face, you might want to make the chin a bit stronger depending on what you're going for but the way the chin is now is fine too
haha i hope that helps, sometimes i'm pretty useless when it comes to critiquing

[littl3chocobo]

so you see the hair too? and you think it needs to have more on top? how about an overall reduction?

[Daring Scylla]

Either reduce the hair down bottom or make it thicker on top, because it ddoesn't flow the way it is now
also i was wrong about composition being hok, something about it bothers me... it's like something isn't right. I have to figure out what

[littl3chocobo]

;^; if you do and it's the same thing that bothers me i will give you art as a gift, i just have not had something happen like this in a very long tome and to be so in the dark as to /why/ is beyond me

[Daring Scylla]

i hate that, when I'm looking at something and i'm like "what is wrong with this" and everything bothers me about it but I don't know WHAT