[Fey]

sure, hit me with your best shot!
and I think the drangons name is archibald...archie...or at least thats what he likes...

[littl3chocobo]

oops, i just noticed that is the wrong ver of the monster^^:

this one;

though the idea you put forth is still very good

and the fish unspoiled for size;

[Fey]

LOL okay, new critique for the beast then...
I really like the overall composition of this version, though I'm still feeling like if you want the focus to be on the tattoos you've got a lot going on around them. That being said, I don't think this is 'missing out' on that not being the focus, I personally think if you add the details to the scarf bit it'll be awesome-sauce!

Onto the fishie!
I think the adjustments for the hips were PERFECT it now looks very floaty/relaxed and once you add in the main tailfin bits I think it'll balance out nicely! Whether you were going for it or not I get a very 'infinity' feel to the composition.

wow...longer bit there...eh he he

[littl3chocobo]

so shift focus to the whole and not the part? i think i can do that, this is a sample art mind you, it'll have to stand without color and for a while


it does, though no she does not seem to be resting so much as she seems bored

though points to you for getting it, that was the entire point of the shape^^

[Fey]

\o/
LOL I love seeing things that are not there, but there!

But yeah, worry less about a small focal point and focus more on the whole. And I think it'll stand quite well without colour, let the focus on details and layout do the talking and it'll sing.

bleh, off to work now...I don't want to go...:: pouts:: feel free to dump art for comment into my inbox and I'll reply once I get home later today :D

[MeiMei]

So many posts to wake up to.. @u@;

How's everyone?

[littl3chocobo]

i will and thankyou sweetie<3 try not to kill anyone at work<3


hello mis mei<3 i was using your thread to bounce ideas off someone who won't jst say 'it's so good it is perfect' and leave me hanging

[MeiMei]

Good morning,Chocobo. c: And that's fine. xD Good purpose for the thread~ c:

[littl3chocobo]

and free lookieloos for all the little art lovers too haha

[MeiMei]

Well, technically the lookeyloos make people a bit jelly that they're not getting art, so it's not that beneficial to them. XDD

[littl3chocobo]

unless they are able to buy or strike the poster's fancy haha~ i've already given away a freebie for the hell of it in this thread^^

[MeiMei]

You have? , 3, Guess I was too tired/lazy to look through. @ 3@;;

[Blaine]

: peeks inL Can I be artwhore too? > 3<

[littl3chocobo]

only if buying scribbles makes you jiggly in the pants

[Blaine]

If buying scribbles of a character not mine own counts then gell yes. ; 3;
Never been one to obssess over his own character nuuuu

I find a brooding elf in a vidya game and it's all over. >|T
Buy so much art of him. El oh el.

And cute art Chocobo. c:

And what if it's..a little more firm than jiggly..?

[littl3chocobo]

firm works too you are in for sure hahahaha~


thanks, it's close to done now, want to see?