[littl3chocobo]

i don't mind, haha, i like actiony stuff more

the original ver of this inspired the other but it was trash so i started from scratch, my prompt? naked but within the perameters of 'appropriate' just laying down likes though at the moment though i will keep the girl's neck for sure, came out lovely

[Wicked]

I love her BODY my gawd.
Collar bones, waist for the love of toast I like that girl's ARMPIT
And the hair pulling!

[littl3chocobo]

girls are what i know and angles too, though what it is is i was paid 25k which is not quite double so even the hash lines have to look good hahaha


<< though that elbow needs /lots/ of work still yet

[Wicked]

Oh! know what?
I didn't even notice until you said something
but it is a rather Dali elbow.

I'm in no place to judge. My anatomy sucks.

[littl3chocobo]

hehe mine too, ok be back in a bit i have furniture hunting to do, bai!

[Wicked]

I'm probably going to pop off to bed. See you soon.

[Fey]

Ooooooo, wow, two pretty arts this morning, my day is starting off nice. I like it so far, but it feels like her head may be set to far back on her neck...at least as it is now. Either that or her chin isn't coming out enough ::tilts head:: either way, I wait with anticipation to see how it progresses :D

[littl3chocobo]

oh, it is^^: hm...maybe i can angle the face to 'correct' it?

[Fey]

I think, and mind you this is coming from me, if you redo the 'profile' it'll work out fine. Right now the ears and hair sit about where they should, it's just the profile line that's too far back.

[littl3chocobo]

if i pull it forward though the shape of the neck won't work and the neck is what keeps the rest together

[Pinkie]

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=Looks at art atop of the page= Wow...I like that pose!!!!


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[littl3chocobo]

which art sweetie?

[Fey]

::twists head from side to side::
I have no idea then, to me I don't see that the move would hurt the over all layout of it, but I'm also not an artist so I can only go with my gut. Part of why my comments are always best taken with a grain of salt I'm afraid.

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AThe one that your drawing choco! I love the pose of it so far and it only has one character so far with the hands of another lol


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[littl3chocobo]

no it's a good observation for sure an a nice suggestion, i am just very happy with the neck/shoulder curve as it is^^:


ah, rose's art, sorry there were three and the one at the 'top' was a linked art not made by me(vampire guy side profile)

[Fey]

you know me, you put it up I'll stare at it all day :D