[Belle]

"Bastian? thanks I had a nice time" she said softly to him before walking home letting herself in she locked herself in her room and cried herself to sleep her father having died a few years ago.

(sure, you start)

[Illusion]

(Well.. I'm kinda waiting on plot from you. You have somewhat plot from me, it's time to get to know Malia and her "other" selves. So you start off xD.)

[Belle]

Malia sighed looking through her closet picking who she wanted to be for the day, her personalities came into person when her father died, replacing the void was her different people "mom, where's my black beret?" she called out
"On your shelf!" her mother called back walking in "how many people must you have? just be you, that's what he would have wanted" she said leaning on the door frame dressed in a orange oriental patterned robe
"but mom, this is how I cope" she said softly putting on her wig and jersey "beside's I'll tell the rest of them around the end of the season"
"do you promise Malia Jean?" She asked her orange hair flying every which way
"yes mother. I'll see you later" she said softly walking out of the house

[Illusion]

(I'm going to kill you here... Write more? xDDD I want to see paragraphs xD.)

[Belle]

(happy?)

[Illusion]

(I have nothing to work with.. xD sorry)

[Belle]

Malia sighed as she got to school seeing Bastian she walked over to him "If you even think about giving up my secret I will kill you myself" she hissed before walking off pushing nerds, and flirting with some of the girls to get them to leave her alone, just like her jock personality always did. Walking off to the courtyard to relax and wait for Bastian to come find her, something that she wanted him to do.
(how's that?)

[Illusion]

(Much better in comparison to the last thing you wrote xD. Your still squishing but not at a huge extent. The only thing I want to point out is when you said "Like her jock personality" Don't be saying like this personality, because the person reading doesn't know what this personality is because you haven't introduce it yet. So in short don't mention something that hasn't been introduce yet unless it serves for plot later.)

Across the field a young boy wearing a middle school uniform is staring at Malia through Binoculars. Amongst him was a taller, extremely skinny kid wearing glasses.
"Woah, woah woah. She's new, how many hot girls are coming to this school anyway?" The smaller boy said. "Man when I finish school, I'm going there!"
"HEY HEY! NO FAIR! LET ME LOOK!" The taller boy said snatching the binoculars from the smaller boy. "WOAH! Man! I wonder what color are her panties!"
"You idiot! Girls like her don't wear any!"
"Whaat!? No way!"
"So true! They are born hookers!"
"Hey what are you two doing!?" A women said, she was dressed with a long black skirt, and white riffled top. She had short red hair that goes down to her neck, and wore thin black glasses.
"Crap it's Ms. Heartveil!" The boys said at the same time.
"Jimmy, Timothy.. IS THAT YOU? WHY ARE YOU HEADING TO CLASS?" Ms. Heartveil then grabs the boys by the ears and then walks off dragging the boys. "You two aren't missing class again to be looking at Niamoria High School girls again?"
"WERE SORRY!" Both boys said at the time.

(Haha.. I just wrote you some admirers xDD )

[Belle]

Malia sighed she had changed back into her real self, no personalities no other people to be, just plain old her. She sighed and curled up at the far end of the bleachers reading, lost in her own world as she read of Far off places, daring sword fights, magic spells, and a prince in disguise. Looking up she sighed "sometimes i wish things were like my books always a happy ending" she muttered before seeing the cheerleaders practicing

"Jennie! no it's left right left right center jump!" Maryanne yelled at the freshmen
"Sorry Maryanne, I'm trying!" she said trying to do it perfectly "I can't do this!"
"yes you can, follow my lead"
"okay Maryanne" she said following the captain
"common! this needs to be perfect for homecoming next week!"

(bonus points if you guess what disney film the book description is part if)

[Illusion]

(I was sorta thinking Hallows Moving Castle for some reason, but that's not Disney. And.. Oh yeah.. You squished stuff again, when did she changed? xDDD)

[Belle]

(well she was her jock dressed in the wig and everything but then you had the middle schoolers see she was a girl! and yes it is, Beauty and the Beast, when she's in the bookstore in the beginning)

[Illusion]

(Oh wait you were dressed as a guy? xDDD Maybe you need to clarify what kind of person the personality is, I remember hearing Beret so I thought it was a girl... And OK you added characters which you just edit in and I failed to see xD... I will admit that edit made me laugh a bit. ITS RIGHT LEFT RIGHT LEFT CENTER JUMP DAMMIT D<

Oh and P.S. You won't be seeing Bastion today, so you better be finding something else to do >DDD)

[Belle]

(fiine, just post please)

[Illusion]

(Nope all up to you this time >D, Bastion isn't around today. So you need to develop a storyline. Your the main character after all, and I don't mean character storyline. Maybe I should leave you something to work with.)

"Umm excuse me? Your Malia right?" A girl said, she was one of the girls working in Clair's dress shop. "Madam Clair wanted me to give you this letter." The girl hands it over and walked off without a word. The letter wrote,

"Malia, I will be gone for a few days! So I'm writing down some chores for you to do in the meantime...
1. Pick up a outfit at Clair's.
2. Clean up my room! I live at 109 Cherryway.
3. Take Blacky to the park!
4. Make friends!

I hope everything turns out great when I get back!"

[Belle]

Malia nodded "yes" she said to the girl, before taking the letter and reading it, she sighed "idiot" she muttered "I am not cleaning his room, I am not a maid. blacky?" she muttered confused she was about to ask the girl before realizing she was already gone "I hope it's not another dress, if it is I'm picking the goddamn color" she muttered getting up.

At the end of the school day she walked off to the dress shop "Clair?" she called out walking in "Bastian said I had to pick up an outfit" she said looking for the woman braced for being whisked into the backroom again

[Illusion]

Suddenly the girls marched towards Malia, wearing camo versions of their work outfits.
"HUT HUT HUT HUT HUT." The girls said aloud grabbing Malia and dragging her into the back dressing room.
"AATTTTTENTION LADIES!" A grouchy crude voice is heard, it was definitely Clair to some extent. She walks in dressed in a stylish Sargent suit. "WE HAVE ORDERS FROM BASTION TO TAKE THIS GIRL IN AND DRESS HER INTO MY FAMOUS MAID LE ZEL OUTFIT! ARE MY ORDERS CLEAR!?"
"YES MAM, YES!" The girls yelled out loudly.
"GOOD! NOW I WANT TO SEE THIS GIRL IN THE OUTFIT STAT!"
"YES MAN, YES!"
The girls began tearing off Malia's clothes changing her into a maid outfit.