[Gabe Puratekuta]

Okay ^^

[Delicious Nightmare]

Im terribly shy when it come to my writings.

[Gabe Puratekuta]

I'm the same way. My unfinished stuff doesn't get read

[Delicious Nightmare]

even with my finished ones i need to think its good enough before i share.

[Gabe Puratekuta]

Well, sometimes you need to show one and ask someone to proofread it

[Delicious Nightmare]

I don't want to take the chance of getting told it sucks lol.

[Gabe Puratekuta]

The only people that would say that are those that don't know how to give constructive criticism and don't know the first thing about decent writing. Which is why you ask someone that also has written something

[Delicious Nightmare]

Yeah that might be true. I put up my very first story on a site called elftown and i got almost laughed at. Because of my misspellings and bad grammar. I was told if i was a writer i would know how to write. And it kinda put me off to sharing.

[Gabe Puratekuta]

That's horrible!!

If you'd like, you can just e-mail it to me and I can tell you what I think of it through a reply or a PM

[Delicious Nightmare]

I'll show you the one im working on when i get more of it done. Right now im stuck at a part.

[Gabe Puratekuta]

Oh? Anything I can help with?

[Delicious Nightmare]

I dont know, I do know i need to start role playing. That always helps my writings.

[Gabe Puratekuta]

I wouldn't mind RPing with you ^^

[Delicious Nightmare]

I know, what would you like to do? Do you have a setting or a story line you would like to use?

[Gabe Puratekuta]

Well, I kinda want to do a mistress/maid one. And since Yahoo! can connect with MSN, we can try it on that

[Delicious Nightmare]

Well I has yahoo.
I did not know they can contect with each other thats cool. good to know.