[Awen Moonshine]

Hmmm... Perhaps add a thin tail of hair (as in ponytail) and a bracelet/cuff? ^_^;;

[dragoness129]

It seems a bit off balance at the bottom right. Perhaps adding more gold there since there is a lot of gold at the top but none on the bottom.

[Awen Moonshine]

Perhaps use red or silver for the hair colour rather than purple?

[Ginger]

The pink of the lantern is a little off. Maybe save up and replace with the floating lanterns from Xinnian :)

[Lawtan]

Hmm...the book looks out of place. Perhaps use a fog to blend it with the other colors better?

[jaguarlyra]

A bit to cluttered for my tastes. Maybe remove something from the background so that more of the viewers focus goes to your avatar?

[Ginger]

I thought the book looked out of place too. I ended up changing today because it was bothering me lol.

I'm thinking some clouds in the sky to better balance out the background. Heimdall's Guard clouds.

[Tiva]

Maybe a bit of pink in the legs to tie into the other parts of the avatar?

[Ginger]

Done! C:

Hmm... how about layering the red sparkles from the beta item up front?

[jaguarlyra]

Maybe add some thigh tattoos?