[Gallagher]

Nah, for it to be hell venom, the snakes would have had to either have 1. the ability to talk, aka use their silver forked tongues to lure you into sin, 2. wings, because duh hell snakes, 3. be at least 4.72x larger than these ones, again because duh, 4. literally have been on fire this entire time and we just never noticed, i will admit most possible but, or 5. be purple.

[Lawtan]

Nope. Just super-dead-fuck-abnormally quick-venom

Kadia had Rurik keep Dante on his side, and opened the aid box inside of Rurik. Grapping one of Rurik’s syringe-pumps, and a relaxant, she administered that to Dante to reduce the convulsing. Now able to grab the bitten limbs, she wrapped chords around them, greatly reducing the bloodflow momentarily to those limbs. She could not flush such toxins out of Dante’s system, and he had went eerily still. With another syringe, she tried multiple antivenoms…to little effect. Limited, Kadia did the only thing possible. Cleaning the blood away, she tied Dante’s limb stiff, and injected the two now-empty syringe-pumps near the black-red swollen bite-marks on the leg. Pulling in reverse, despite being a near futile effort, she tried to draw the tainted blood. In coagulated clumps, it collected…
Dante was starting to grow cold and stiff. In a panic, Kadia, frantic to not let another person die…not again…withdrew the syringes, and plugged up Rurik’s defibrillator.
“Clear!” She cried, and 120 volts went into the drunkard. Nothing happened.
“Clear!” She tried again, “Please….Clear!”
Kadia was in tears, unable to help the guy who helped her, when Thomas stepped forward.

Critique?

[Espy]

So. Going ti attempt to phone-type with half frozen fingers.

Hallucinations of the visual kind will not affect him. Auditory, yes.

I meant permanent dmg as in from healing, not the venom. Unless it has a way of eroding bone and tissue in irreparable ways, which shouldn't be a thing. But I can always have him slightly incapped until Gall's healer boy comes into play.

EDIT: Dante is slightly peeved that Kadia called him a drunkard. Also, she would have no way of knowing that anyhow.

[Lawtan]

He'll have scars, but they shouldn't be inhibiting.

[Gallagher]

Healerbro will be able to heal Dante's vision, too, so dealing with venom cripple wouldn't be too long lasting, if you want to go that route.

Will pick through your thing in a sec Law.

Also, Healerbro can remove scars.

[Espy]

At this point, I'm not sure if I want him to regain his vision. It should 't be hard to fix -- it's just a matter of repairing burn damage.

Actually, there's also the point of dead optical cells and the decayt hat comes woth that.

[Gallagher]

Just... just trust me on this. I have given it a lot of thought to figure out if he could, and he can. And he will likely offer. This is your warning so you can come up with some bullshit excuse to keep putting it off.

[Suzerain of Sheol]

Originally Posted by Lawtan

Nope. Just super-dead-fuck-abnormally quick-venom

Kadia had Rurik keep Dante on his side, and opened the aid box inside of Rurik. Grapping one of Rurik’s syringe-pumps, and a relaxant, she administered that to Dante to reduce the convulsing. Now able to grab the bitten limbs, she wrapped chords around them, greatly reducing the bloodflow momentarily to those limbs. She could not flush such toxins out of Dante’s system, and he had went eerily still. With another syringe, she tried multiple antivenoms…to little effect. Limited, Kadia did the only thing possible. Cleaning the blood away, she tied Dante’s limb stiff, and injected the two now-empty syringe-pumps near the black-red swollen bite-marks on the leg. Pulling in reverse, despite being a near futile effort, she tried to draw the tainted blood. In coagulated clumps, it collected…
Dante was starting to grow cold and stiff. In a panic, Kadia, frantic to not let another person die…not again…withdrew the syringes, and plugged up Rurik’s defibrillator.
“Clear!” She cried, and 120 volts went into the drunkard. Nothing happened.
“Clear!” She tried again, “Please….Clear!”
Kadia was in tears, unable to help the guy who helped her, when Thomas stepped forward.

Critique?

So, speaking as someone who's be defibrillated, that's not how it works. It's used to shock the heart back into a normal rhythm, not to restart one that has ceased beating entirely.

However, you CAN leave this in if she really wouldn't know that, and Thomas will explain to her why she's not doing Dante any good. :P

[Gallagher]

Okay. Law. Law bby.

My tip for you.

Stop. Slow down. You do not need to do all the things in one post. Please. Take a breath.

And on that note, do not have Thomas step forward. You do not control him. We know he will save Dante, but will he react immediately? Will he curse her out first? Will he need to be convinced? WE don't know until SUZE makes him react.

[Lawtan]

I thought you could use it for both...or am I thinking of something else...
...That's why I was running it past you all...

[Suzerain of Sheol]

TVTROPES TO THE RESCUE!

[Lawtan]

Plot points:
Rurik retrieves Dante from the snakes
Kadia joins Thomas's part of the fight
Rurik gets Dante to Kadia, but she can't fix the issue...

Okay...I didn't realize that about Defibrillators. Kadia will go back to the first aid technique, then.

[Espy]

So, my usual fix for that'd be to have Kadia just look at Thomas. If he cares enough, he'll prob help, or at least yell at her first.

[Gallagher]

The snakes are all dead already, right?

I like the idea of her trying defib, but she will look kinda dumb if you keep it in. Dunno if you mind that.

I am loving this mini-drama here though, getting Thomas to help when she can't. It tickles me.

Honestly, I'm mostly good with the post right up until around where she's clot sucking.

[Lawtan]

I am a bit confused about doing "all the things"
I would say I am surprised at how little I know, but knowing where I came from, I am not.

effort, she tried to draw the tainted blood. In coagulated clumps, it collected…
Dante was starting to grow cold and stiff. In a panic, Kadia, frantic to not let another person die…not again…withdrew the syringes. Shoulders over his chest, in a vertical position above his sternum, she began CPR.
“One…Two…Three…Four…Live!”
She went down and forced a breath through his still mouth. She got back up, and repeated, not quite remembering the proper count…
"You...have...to...live!" Kadia says with tears falling down.

[Espy]

No, it's not just that part that's problematic -- she's doing a lot of stuff in a long sequence. Space it out a bit. You don't need to do that all in one post. Let someone else maybe interfere.