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Jessibuns · Posted 09-16-2010, 09:00 PM

I have been blinded.
Blinded by a sight so beautiful.
My lips form your name,
But not a sound escapes.

I just met the boy.
The boy at the end of my dreams.
The boy at the end of the hall.
The boy nobody knows.

Is it possible,
For a boy so beautiful,
To Cure Me?

Vanitas · Posted 09-19-2010, 03:42 PM

So beautiful and simple. It reminds me of how I used to find a boy so beautiful and no one really paid him much attention or really understood him. This really captures the beginning stages of love or whatever.

Jessibuns · Posted 09-19-2010, 06:16 PM

Thank you.
(:

Kotomi · Posted 09-24-2010, 09:09 AM

I'm left with a kind of unfinished feeling, it slightly haunts me (as if it is deeper than just words)
a very nice poem

Morgan · Posted 09-24-2010, 09:15 AM

Lovely!

Jessibuns · Posted 09-24-2010, 01:41 PM

Thanks everyone.
(:

Bookworm_Ninja · Posted 09-24-2010, 10:32 PM

Beautifully haunting, conveys wonder to me :) always a good poem when you can sense the emotions

Jessibuns · Posted 09-27-2010, 06:32 PM

Glad you like it.
(:

Rave · Posted 10-05-2010, 04:06 PM

I love the simplicity. A lot of people try to hard to complicate poetry. But I think the emotion is conveyed very well and it's definitely striking.

Jessibuns On in to the future		Cure Me	#1
	I have been blinded. Blinded by a sight so beautiful. My lips form your name, But not a sound escapes. I just met the boy. The boy at the end of my dreams. The boy at the end of the hall. The boy nobody knows. Is it possible, For a boy so beautiful, To Cure Me? I'm Jessi. non binary, pansexual. she/her they/them. I age regress. signs I’m regressin- when I say haihai (or just hai) when I use cute emotes like - o u o. sometimes I like txt talk too, it’s like me slipping out of “adult speak” I NEED posting currency, I have 90 runes to sell.
		Posted 09-16-2010, 09:00 PM

Jessibuns On in to the future			#3
	Thank you. (: I'm Jessi. non binary, pansexual. she/her they/them. I age regress. signs I’m regressin- when I say haihai (or just hai) when I use cute emotes like - o u o. sometimes I like txt talk too, it’s like me slipping out of “adult speak” I NEED posting currency, I have 90 runes to sell.
		Posted 09-19-2010, 06:16 PM

Morgan White's pet			#5
	Lovely! Comfort always made the rescue, we always hoped "for the best". I'll burn this with torches, and drown in my consideration "You are far too squishy to ever be feared." White.
		Posted 09-24-2010, 09:15 AM

		#6	Jessibuns On in to the future
Thanks everyone. (: I'm Jessi. non binary, pansexual. she/her they/them. I age regress. signs I’m regressin- when I say haihai (or just hai) when I use cute emotes like - o u o. sometimes I like txt talk too, it’s like me slipping out of “adult speak” I NEED posting currency, I have 90 runes to sell.
	Posted 09-24-2010, 01:41 PM

		#8	Jessibuns On in to the future
Glad you like it. (: I'm Jessi. non binary, pansexual. she/her they/them. I age regress. signs I’m regressin- when I say haihai (or just hai) when I use cute emotes like - o u o. sometimes I like txt talk too, it’s like me slipping out of “adult speak” I NEED posting currency, I have 90 runes to sell.
	Posted 09-27-2010, 06:32 PM

		#2	Vanitas light always wins
So beautiful and simple. It reminds me of how I used to find a boy so beautiful and no one really paid him much attention or really understood him. This really captures the beginning stages of love or whatever.
	Posted 09-19-2010, 03:42 PM

		#4	Kotomi Hakuna matata
I'm left with a kind of unfinished feeling, it slightly haunts me (as if it is deeper than just words) a very nice poem
	Posted 09-24-2010, 09:09 AM

Bookworm_Ninja Cherry Blossom Bunny			#7
	Beautifully haunting, conveys wonder to me :) always a good poem when you can sense the emotions
		Posted 09-24-2010, 10:32 PM

Rave Psych			#9
	I love the simplicity. A lot of people try to hard to complicate poetry. But I think the emotion is conveyed very well and it's definitely striking.
		Posted 10-05-2010, 04:06 PM

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