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BabyMalinko · Posted 03-04-2013, 03:18 AM

The story line will progress as the rp goes on. Please give everyone resonable time to reply. I may put a limit on how many people can join the rp depending on how many actually want to do this rp and join. Ill be going on a point system and rewarding experience for certain things such as kills, useing skills, succesfull mission completion, etc.
The story so far:
Somewhere in the heart of Grillok lies a village surrounded by the dreaded forest. The village has been forgotten and many people who need a place to hide or have been cast out from their original villages and towns can come and have a peacful time. This all changed when the shadowlings appeared. A group of assins trying to rule the world. The village now haveing the last of the heros (Or villans) in the world has been sought out by the most powerful of the kings that rule Grillok. Who will rise to the challenge and become the hero.
Charachter sheet.
Name:
Age:
Race:
Class:
Sex:
History:
Clan:
Guild:
Occupation:
Desription:
Weapons:(Primary) (Secondary)
Powers: (1-3)More as you progress through the story.

Natsunaine · Posted 03-04-2013, 03:27 AM

Hm, Well you told me to look and give my opinion so let me start..(please do not take offence I'm giving my honest and blunt opinion)

First of all Your explanation of the RP, Is very little detailed.
Your plot is a bit dry. Why do the assassin's want to rule the world? What do the clans/guilds have to do with the story? What kind of powers are in the story? What time line? What races are in your story? Um.. Im sure if i gave it more thought I could think of more.. I'm going to link you to one of my more thought out rps for an example..

BabyMalinko · Posted 03-04-2013, 03:31 AM

Alright well thats what this is for so i can list everything and let everyone know everything. I planned on working more of it out and i dont wanna say why the assasins want to rule the world becuase that was part of the story to be a surprise.

Natsunaine · Posted 03-04-2013, 03:32 AM

Click here.

that ought to give you an idea of things haha

BabyMalinko · Posted 03-04-2013, 03:39 AM

How do you make spoilers?

Natsunaine · Posted 03-04-2013, 03:44 AM

Oh, well the code is [spoil ](text here [/spoil ] Withouth the spaces ofcourse

BabyMalinko · Posted 03-04-2013, 04:00 AM

Alright i made a character if thats ok

Natsunaine · Posted 03-04-2013, 04:04 AM

Ya thats fine, Just know that no one liners are allowed :P

BabyMalinko · Posted 03-04-2013, 04:05 AM

lol i can do more then one liners i just dont usually try lol

Natsunaine · Posted 03-04-2013, 04:08 AM

Alright, Im just letting you know ^^..

BabyMalinko · Posted 03-04-2013, 04:19 AM

Alright. Hey wanna help me makeing this one? Like all the classes and races and stuff.

Natsunaine · Posted 03-04-2013, 04:23 AM

I will tomorrow right now i just wanna post :P

BabyMalinko · Posted 03-04-2013, 04:27 AM

Alright lol.

Natsunaine · Posted 03-04-2013, 04:40 AM

Careful with the one word posts, they are no nos..

Poggio · Posted 03-07-2013, 12:19 AM

Uh pardon me for interrupting but

one natsu one liners are allowed, its Baby's thread, so unless they make a rule that says people have to post at least a paragraph I think its fine. second I understand the plot. It is generic enough to gain interest yet it has conflict and a basic struggle so it has room to grow.

XD that being said when you rather if you, make the thread I will sign up.

Natsunaine · Posted 03-07-2013, 01:32 AM

Pogs, I was refering to my rp ;P Chris.. I mean.. Baby new what i was talking about :P

BabyMalinko Multiply Six by Nine		Village of forgotten souls	#1
	The story line will progress as the rp goes on. Please give everyone resonable time to reply. I may put a limit on how many people can join the rp depending on how many actually want to do this rp and join. Ill be going on a point system and rewarding experience for certain things such as kills, useing skills, succesfull mission completion, etc. The story so far: Somewhere in the heart of Grillok lies a village surrounded by the dreaded forest. The village has been forgotten and many people who need a place to hide or have been cast out from their original villages and towns can come and have a peacful time. This all changed when the shadowlings appeared. A group of assins trying to rule the world. The village now haveing the last of the heros (Or villans) in the world has been sought out by the most powerful of the kings that rule Grillok. Who will rise to the challenge and become the hero. Charachter sheet. Name: Age: Race: Class: Sex: History: Clan: Guild: Occupation: Desription: Weapons:(Primary) (Secondary) Powers: (1-3)More as you progress through the story.
		Posted 03-04-2013, 03:18 AM

		#2	Natsunaine Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker
Hm, Well you told me to look and give my opinion so let me start..(please do not take offence I'm giving my honest and blunt opinion) First of all Your explanation of the RP, Is very little detailed. Your plot is a bit dry. Why do the assassin's want to rule the world? What do the clans/guilds have to do with the story? What kind of powers are in the story? What time line? What races are in your story? Um.. Im sure if i gave it more thought I could think of more.. I'm going to link you to one of my more thought out rps for an example.. "Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain" "I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality" "" "Traded a merciful heart for a murdererï¿½s brain But now I curse what's in my head Because I can't stop seeing red"
	Posted 03-04-2013, 03:27 AM

		#4	Natsunaine Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker
Click here. that ought to give you an idea of things haha "Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain" "I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality" "" "Traded a merciful heart for a murdererï¿½s brain But now I curse what's in my head Because I can't stop seeing red"
	Posted 03-04-2013, 03:32 AM

		#6	Natsunaine Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker
Oh, well the code is [spoil ](text here [/spoil ] Withouth the spaces ofcourse "Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain" "I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality" "" "Traded a merciful heart for a murdererï¿½s brain But now I curse what's in my head Because I can't stop seeing red"
	Posted 03-04-2013, 03:44 AM

		#8	Natsunaine Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker
Ya thats fine, Just know that no one liners are allowed :P "Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain" "I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality" "" "Traded a merciful heart for a murdererï¿½s brain But now I curse what's in my head Because I can't stop seeing red"
	Posted 03-04-2013, 04:04 AM

BabyMalinko Multiply Six by Nine			#3
	Alright well thats what this is for so i can list everything and let everyone know everything. I planned on working more of it out and i dont wanna say why the assasins want to rule the world becuase that was part of the story to be a surprise.
		Posted 03-04-2013, 03:31 AM

BabyMalinko Multiply Six by Nine			#5
	How do you make spoilers?
		Posted 03-04-2013, 03:39 AM

BabyMalinko Multiply Six by Nine			#7
	Alright i made a character if thats ok
		Posted 03-04-2013, 04:00 AM

BabyMalinko Multiply Six by Nine			#9
	lol i can do more then one liners i just dont usually try lol
		Posted 03-04-2013, 04:05 AM

		#10	Natsunaine Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker
Alright, Im just letting you know ^^.. "Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain" "I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality" "" "Traded a merciful heart for a murdererï¿½s brain But now I curse what's in my head Because I can't stop seeing red"
	Posted 03-04-2013, 04:08 AM

BabyMalinko Multiply Six by Nine			#11
	Alright. Hey wanna help me makeing this one? Like all the classes and races and stuff.
		Posted 03-04-2013, 04:19 AM

		#12	Natsunaine Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker
I will tomorrow right now i just wanna post :P "Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain" "I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality" "" "Traded a merciful heart for a murdererï¿½s brain But now I curse what's in my head Because I can't stop seeing red"
	Posted 03-04-2013, 04:23 AM

BabyMalinko Multiply Six by Nine			#13
	Alright lol.
		Posted 03-04-2013, 04:27 AM

		#14	Natsunaine Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker
Careful with the one word posts, they are no nos.. "Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain" "I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality" "" "Traded a merciful heart for a murdererï¿½s brain But now I curse what's in my head Because I can't stop seeing red"
	Posted 03-04-2013, 04:40 AM

Poggio Bald and loving it!			#15
	Uh pardon me for interrupting but one natsu one liners are allowed, its Baby's thread, so unless they make a rule that says people have to post at least a paragraph I think its fine. second I understand the plot. It is generic enough to gain interest yet it has conflict and a basic struggle so it has room to grow. XD that being said when you rather if you, make the thread I will sign up.
		Posted 03-07-2013, 12:19 AM

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		#16	Natsunaine Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker
Pogs, I was refering to my rp ;P Chris.. I mean.. Baby new what i was talking about :P "Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain" "I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality" "" "Traded a merciful heart for a murdererï¿½s brain But now I curse what's in my head Because I can't stop seeing red"
	Posted 03-07-2013, 01:32 AM