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Asami Asami is offline
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Default   #33  
I like how it looks but the middle area is a little too cluttered. Its just a tad too bulkly.
The flames on the hands stand out a bit
andtheres lots of different shades of red/raspberry? Maybe take out one and balance all the others

The face is utterly terrifying tho x'D props on that.


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Old Posted 01-28-2013, 07:55 PM Reply With Quote  
Default   #34   Natsunaine Natsunaine is offline
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I was proud of my face xD

The gloves dont seem like they fit to me for some reason maybe its just me
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Firstly, your avatar is wonderfully terrifying, Natsu. <3

But I think if you added something in a little brighter red (like the color around your waist) up near the top of the head it would balance it out a little more. (:

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Default   #36   Natsunaine Natsunaine is offline
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You are right actually i just couldnt find any good items that went well with it

Thank you fpr the compliment <3

Your avy is gorgeous though i feel a necklace or something around the neck thats small would make it perfect
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I think your avi looks great -- very well put together. If I had to suggest something, maybe a hair/head ornament or more things going on in the background.


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Default   #38   Espy Espy is offline
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Hm...The wrist area looks a tad bit plain. How's about black bracelets/something of that sort?
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I don't know if you modeled the avatar after your drawing or if you drew it based on your avatar, but I think it looks great. They're different enough from each other but I can see the similarities especially in the head region. I think the eyeshadow on your avatar makes you look older and more world-wearied while the drawing looks much younger and brighter. I also think blue eyes would match the rest of the avatar, although the green eyes certainly pop if you're going more for a character than a matchy avatar. The feet look really bright compared to the darker torso/leg area.


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Default   #40   Espy Espy is offline
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The head area seems...really...tight/close-sticking compared to the rest of the avi. Maybe add horns or something?



No, the art was based partially off a previous avatar, actually. And yes, had some issues with the feet. Unfortunately, I couldn't find a good medium blue item for the torso/pants area.

I also completely forgot about the eyes. Oh well.
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Old Posted 02-14-2013, 05:18 PM Reply With Quote  
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I personally love the avatar, but for some odd reason the torso is bothering me.. Maybe some little touches of light blue?
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Default   #42   Mal Kapwn Mal Kapwn is offline
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I really like how well this is put together. The wrench seems a little odd, but I might be missing a cosplay reference.


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Old Posted 02-16-2013, 12:48 PM Reply With Quote  
Asami Asami is offline
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Default   #43  
Very nice but needs more of the dark blue color in the center area
and the light blue towards the head.


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Default   #44   Tiva Tiva is offline
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More purple in the pants area... maybe one of the thongs it just doesn't balance well on the eye.
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The background doesn't seem tied in with the rest of the avatar.


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Old Posted 02-18-2013, 12:22 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #46   Natsunaine Natsunaine is offline
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It is a very good avy i really like maybe something around the feet?..
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

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"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Old Posted 02-18-2013, 02:58 AM Reply With Quote  
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Default   #47  
I love the look. What I would add is yellow or red, above or around the head. And maybe a little more by the feetsies. <3
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Your avatar is stunning and just about flawless to me since I am a fan of lots of layering. The only thing I wonder is why you did not extend the orange/gold up to the head? Also the horns for some reason on my monitor have almost a dark green cast to them. So I would probably switch to a different head item to make this a perfect avatar.
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