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Soul Dreamer · Posted 08-11-2012, 08:47 PM

nice. i look forward to reading them.

Natsunaine · Posted 08-11-2012, 08:49 PM

*nod nod* i put a link on my last post for both of the threads :)

Soul Dreamer · Posted 08-11-2012, 08:59 PM

i liked your story. it was written well but you could use some detailing here and there.

Natsunaine · Posted 08-11-2012, 09:01 PM

lol, I think i posted it there I was more worried about story than i was detail i add in all the detail after i write a few chapters :P

Soul Dreamer · Posted 08-11-2012, 09:03 PM

Oh ok I understand now. It was good

Natsunaine · Posted 08-11-2012, 09:12 PM

Thank you :) the reason i add detail last is because i tend to get more ideas for detail when i re read my work.

Soul Dreamer · Posted 08-11-2012, 09:14 PM

i understand that. and your song lyrics were well written and very tasteful. did you read the poem i have posted?

Natsunaine · Posted 08-11-2012, 09:15 PM

No, May i have a link?

Soul Dreamer · Posted 08-11-2012, 09:22 PM

I'm not good with links but its in the writer's diary section, its titled dark poetry. its only got one poem in it though.

Demonskid · Posted 08-11-2012, 09:27 PM

... I MISSED the ANIME talk? D:

ono *goes to corner*

Natsunaine · Posted 08-11-2012, 09:29 PM

O: *lifts dk onto his head* im sorry D: i will make sure to know you are on when i start the next one XD

Demonskid · Posted 08-11-2012, 09:39 PM

;n; wolfs rain... and .hack//sign... i missed it all

*covers up with hair*

Graceful Reaper · Posted 08-13-2012, 05:26 AM

I see you're enjoying your time at Trisphee! :3
Edit: .Hack!? My favorite anime next to Deadman Wonderland! ^_^

Soul Dreamer · Posted 08-13-2012, 05:32 AM

Yea Reaper i like the site. what made you decide to do this?

Graceful Reaper · Posted 08-13-2012, 05:36 AM

Join Trisphee? Oh well Darc recommended it to me after Ookami dragged him on here. Kind of funny actually. :3

Soul Dreamer · Posted 08-13-2012, 05:40 AM

you make it sound like he joined against his will. and she can be rather scary. but i have to ask why did you want me to join?

		#34	Natsunaine Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker
nod nod i put a link on my last post for both of the threads :) "Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain" "I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality" "" "Traded a merciful heart for a murdererï¿½s brain But now I curse what's in my head Because I can't stop seeing red"
	Posted 08-11-2012, 08:49 PM

		#36	Natsunaine Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker
lol, I think i posted it there I was more worried about story than i was detail i add in all the detail after i write a few chapters :P "Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain" "I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality" "" "Traded a merciful heart for a murdererï¿½s brain But now I curse what's in my head Because I can't stop seeing red"
	Posted 08-11-2012, 09:01 PM

		#38	Natsunaine Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker
Thank you :) the reason i add detail last is because i tend to get more ideas for detail when i re read my work. "Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain" "I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality" "" "Traded a merciful heart for a murdererï¿½s brain But now I curse what's in my head Because I can't stop seeing red"
	Posted 08-11-2012, 09:12 PM

		#40	Natsunaine Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker
No, May i have a link? "Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain" "I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality" "" "Traded a merciful heart for a murdererï¿½s brain But now I curse what's in my head Because I can't stop seeing red"
	Posted 08-11-2012, 09:15 PM

		#42	Demonskid Pocket Demon Ninja
... I MISSED the ANIME talk? D: ono goes to corner ã€‚[Crunchyroll] ã€‚[Study Japanese] ã€‚[OTKH] ã€‚ ã€‚Youtube ã€‚Twitch ã€‚
	Posted 08-11-2012, 09:27 PM

Soul Dreamer Barrel of Monkeys			#33
	nice. i look forward to reading them.
		Posted 08-11-2012, 08:47 PM

Soul Dreamer Barrel of Monkeys			#35
	i liked your story. it was written well but you could use some detailing here and there.
		Posted 08-11-2012, 08:59 PM

Soul Dreamer Barrel of Monkeys			#37
	Oh ok I understand now. It was good
		Posted 08-11-2012, 09:03 PM

Soul Dreamer Barrel of Monkeys			#39
	i understand that. and your song lyrics were well written and very tasteful. did you read the poem i have posted?
		Posted 08-11-2012, 09:14 PM

Soul Dreamer Barrel of Monkeys			#41
	I'm not good with links but its in the writer's diary section, its titled dark poetry. its only got one poem in it though.
		Posted 08-11-2012, 09:22 PM

Natsunaine Your Friendly Neighborhood Lurker			#43
	O: lifts dk onto his head im sorry D: i will make sure to know you are on when i start the next one XD "Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain" "I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality" "" "Traded a merciful heart for a murdererï¿½s brain But now I curse what's in my head Because I can't stop seeing red"
		Posted 08-11-2012, 09:29 PM

		#44	Demonskid Pocket Demon Ninja
;n; wolfs rain... and .hack//sign... i missed it all covers up with hair ã€‚[Crunchyroll] ã€‚[Study Japanese] ã€‚[OTKH] ã€‚ ã€‚Youtube ã€‚Twitch ã€‚
	Posted 08-11-2012, 09:39 PM

Graceful Reaper Warrior Of Cosmos			#45
	I see you're enjoying your time at Trisphee! :3 Edit: .Hack!? My favorite anime next to Deadman Wonderland! ^_^ -Terror Of Death-
		Posted 08-13-2012, 05:26 AM

		#46	Soul Dreamer Barrel of Monkeys
Yea Reaper i like the site. what made you decide to do this?
	Posted 08-13-2012, 05:32 AM

Graceful Reaper Warrior Of Cosmos			#47
	Join Trisphee? Oh well Darc recommended it to me after Ookami dragged him on here. Kind of funny actually. :3 -Terror Of Death-
		Posted 08-13-2012, 05:36 AM

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		#48	Soul Dreamer Barrel of Monkeys
you make it sound like he joined against his will. and she can be rather scary. but i have to ask why did you want me to join?
	Posted 08-13-2012, 05:40 AM