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Airina · Posted 04-01-2011, 10:47 PM

*bounces around* evening everyone!

Corvus · Posted 04-01-2011, 10:48 PM

hey airina

Cronislee · Posted 04-01-2011, 10:52 PM

hmmm? Whats up?

Corvus · Posted 04-01-2011, 10:53 PM

Hey cronislee, haven't seen you around in quite a while

Cronislee · Posted 04-01-2011, 10:54 PM

I'm always on, you just kept missing me :)

Corvus · Posted 04-01-2011, 10:55 PM

Doh! epic fail on my part. anyway it's good to see you boss-man

Poggio · Posted 04-01-2011, 11:00 PM

Alrighty, I shall pm you what I think XD. I'm not sure if it will be helpful ( since I have no idea about grammar structures and what not. And I have to warn you I'm big on character development ><

Hi Cron.

Hikori · Posted 04-01-2011, 11:02 PM

.o. ugh crov you made me feel sad .o.

Corvus · Posted 04-01-2011, 11:03 PM

I'm grammar nazi man! and I didn't do much character development because it's meant to be sort of like a one-shot

Poggio · Posted 04-01-2011, 11:04 PM

Then pay no attention to half of my comment XD.

Corvus · Posted 04-01-2011, 11:04 PM

heh, nice man

Hikori · Posted 04-01-2011, 11:08 PM

Well the thing is even with a one shot there can be character development .o.

Corvus · Posted 04-01-2011, 11:09 PM

there is some of course, you learn about the character from his decisions and inner monologues but its less than an actual story would have

Hikori · Posted 04-01-2011, 11:10 PM

which makes sense, i have to admit.

Corvus · Posted 04-01-2011, 11:12 PM

heh, yay me

Poggio · Posted 04-01-2011, 11:19 PM

Lol well I it depends on the pace of the story. If its a 6 word story then there doesn't need to be one.

And even in longer novels I guess its a stylistic choice. But since i always thought Character was the way people connected with the story, they need to be identifiable and redeemable.

Airina Leagues Under the Sea			#19441
	bounces around evening everyone! Mizeria's sister Renata is my boyfriend! <3 He's mine no touchy! Book Haven Closet Lace and Chains: Hearts Intertwined Airina's House of Antiques
		Posted 04-01-2011, 10:47 PM

		#19442	Corvus Hakuna matata
hey airina Evil Overlord List- #7 When I've captured my adversary and he says, "Look, before you kill me, will you at least tell me what this is all about?" I'll say, "No." and shoot him. No, on second thought I'll shoot him then say "No." The Wraith Knight
	Posted 04-01-2011, 10:48 PM

Cronislee The Infernal Knight			#19443
	hmmm? Whats up? * Shogun * "Death has a dignity all its own." The Big Bad Wolf of Trisphee Designed the O-Yoroi item set An Explosive Chinchila Lioshika's Bodyguard The Infernal Knight The Grand Templar
		Posted 04-01-2011, 10:52 PM

		#19444	Corvus Hakuna matata
Hey cronislee, haven't seen you around in quite a while Evil Overlord List- #7 When I've captured my adversary and he says, "Look, before you kill me, will you at least tell me what this is all about?" I'll say, "No." and shoot him. No, on second thought I'll shoot him then say "No." The Wraith Knight
	Posted 04-01-2011, 10:53 PM

Cronislee The Infernal Knight			#19445
	I'm always on, you just kept missing me :) * Shogun * "Death has a dignity all its own." The Big Bad Wolf of Trisphee Designed the O-Yoroi item set An Explosive Chinchila Lioshika's Bodyguard The Infernal Knight The Grand Templar
		Posted 04-01-2011, 10:54 PM

		#19446	Corvus Hakuna matata
Doh! epic fail on my part. anyway it's good to see you boss-man Evil Overlord List- #7 When I've captured my adversary and he says, "Look, before you kill me, will you at least tell me what this is all about?" I'll say, "No." and shoot him. No, on second thought I'll shoot him then say "No." The Wraith Knight
	Posted 04-01-2011, 10:55 PM

Poggio Bald and loving it!			#19447
	Alrighty, I shall pm you what I think XD. I'm not sure if it will be helpful ( since I have no idea about grammar structures and what not. And I have to warn you I'm big on character development >< Hi Cron.
		Posted 04-01-2011, 11:00 PM

		#19448	Hikori Xhenos Machina
.o. ugh crov you made me feel sad .o. *Elegia de beatus: dolore de realitatem...*
	Posted 04-01-2011, 11:02 PM

Corvus Hakuna matata			#19449
	I'm grammar nazi man! and I didn't do much character development because it's meant to be sort of like a one-shot Evil Overlord List- #7 When I've captured my adversary and he says, "Look, before you kill me, will you at least tell me what this is all about?" I'll say, "No." and shoot him. No, on second thought I'll shoot him then say "No." The Wraith Knight
		Posted 04-01-2011, 11:03 PM

		#19450	Poggio Bald and loving it!
Then pay no attention to half of my comment XD.
	Posted 04-01-2011, 11:04 PM

Corvus Hakuna matata			#19451
	heh, nice man Evil Overlord List- #7 When I've captured my adversary and he says, "Look, before you kill me, will you at least tell me what this is all about?" I'll say, "No." and shoot him. No, on second thought I'll shoot him then say "No." The Wraith Knight
		Posted 04-01-2011, 11:04 PM

		#19452	Hikori Xhenos Machina
Well the thing is even with a one shot there can be character development .o. *Elegia de beatus: dolore de realitatem...*
	Posted 04-01-2011, 11:08 PM

Corvus Hakuna matata			#19453
	there is some of course, you learn about the character from his decisions and inner monologues but its less than an actual story would have Evil Overlord List- #7 When I've captured my adversary and he says, "Look, before you kill me, will you at least tell me what this is all about?" I'll say, "No." and shoot him. No, on second thought I'll shoot him then say "No." The Wraith Knight
		Posted 04-01-2011, 11:09 PM

		#19454	Hikori Xhenos Machina
which makes sense, i have to admit. *Elegia de beatus: dolore de realitatem...*
	Posted 04-01-2011, 11:10 PM

Corvus Hakuna matata			#19455
	heh, yay me Evil Overlord List- #7 When I've captured my adversary and he says, "Look, before you kill me, will you at least tell me what this is all about?" I'll say, "No." and shoot him. No, on second thought I'll shoot him then say "No." The Wraith Knight
		Posted 04-01-2011, 11:12 PM

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		#19456	Poggio Bald and loving it!
Lol well I it depends on the pace of the story. If its a 6 word story then there doesn't need to be one. And even in longer novels I guess its a stylistic choice. But since i always thought Character was the way people connected with the story, they need to be identifiable and redeemable.
	Posted 04-01-2011, 11:19 PM