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Tohopekaliga
Forward Thinker
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Well, what people are wearing doesn't have to be an important detail. :P
I mean, it might be an important detail, but...perhaps not. Maybe they're all nudists, and you'll do a sudden reveal of that 2/3 the way through. | ||||
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| Posted 11-03-2016, 02:47 PM |
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trystan830
Queen of Typoes
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LOL that's funny, Toho!!
if i describe clothing and stuff, i get more word that way. XD
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| Posted 11-03-2016, 02:49 PM |
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Tohopekaliga
Forward Thinker
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It's true, but NOT describing it means more words go into story. :P
And getting to big reveal their nudistry. | ||||
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| Posted 11-03-2016, 02:50 PM |
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trystan830
Queen of Typoes
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LOL... BUT there's no nudists, so :P
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| Posted 11-03-2016, 02:55 PM |
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Tohopekaliga
Forward Thinker
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So the reader thinks, right? :P
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| Posted 11-03-2016, 03:30 PM |
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Gallagher
It Won't Stop
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i never write about things like clothing or anything until they either become important to the story, or additional description is needed to slow the flow of a scene. i prefer to describe body language over scenery and props.
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| Posted 11-03-2016, 03:32 PM |
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trystan830
Queen of Typoes
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sure, Toho, whatever you say....
Galla, i'm like that too. but with NaNo, i try add all kinds of descriptions - it's my 'fluff -n- stuff.' otherwise, my 50,000 word story is over and there's only 30,000 words? hey, it could happen.
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| Posted 11-03-2016, 03:36 PM |
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Tohopekaliga
Forward Thinker
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XD
Well, yeah, I rarely put much detail into clothing and such when I write stuff either. | ||||
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| Posted 11-03-2016, 04:16 PM |
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Glitch
Pixels
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I do only if I am trying to establish something about the character like . . . say a girl thinks she is very high fashion but then has some tacky kids wristwatch on, something like that.
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| Posted 11-03-2016, 06:22 PM |
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trystan830
Queen of Typoes
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yep, i'll do that too, Glitch.
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| Posted 11-03-2016, 06:49 PM |
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Potironette
petite fantaisiste
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"With victory assured, Lincoln finished his sandwich and coffee on election night in Springfield and prepared for his awesome new responsibilities."
I am so happy that this is in my textbook <3 | ||||
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| Posted 11-03-2016, 10:29 PM |
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Tohopekaliga
Forward Thinker
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you can do it! :D
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| Posted 11-18-2016, 04:41 PM |
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#76686 |
Glitch
Pixels
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my grandma bought me a poncho that looks like a sheep today o3o
I'm in love. I want to make it for Trisphee. xD ![]() | ||||
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| Posted 11-18-2016, 06:30 PM |
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dragoness129
Level 100
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That sounds adorable!
I saw some animal winter hats. They were super cute! | ||||
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| Posted 11-20-2016, 10:23 PM |
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daikokunyo
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| Posted 11-20-2016, 11:38 PM |
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