[Suzerain of Sheol]

Hi, everyone. If you'd be so kind, use this thread to post comments on the story for this event. We're in a transitory phase here, so there isn't much action, but this is hardly the end of the story -- we're setting up for so major events to come! I, for one, would love to hear your thoughts and speculations, and I'm sure the other writers would, too. :)

[Illusion]

All I want to know is.. WHERE IS FALLA AND FAUST!? DX *rant* *rant*
I miss them...
I refuse to have any new crappy NPC's who I won't even remember! Bring back Falla and faust! D<

[Rosekitten]

I agree on bringing back the old npcs.. they are what made the story. Also not to be mean or anything.. but I lost track of what the fuck is going on story wise over 3-4 events ago... I tried to keep up i read everything and tried to order it in my head but i couldn't keep going on.. The story isn't that catching in over half of the parts. :(

Not only that but there has to be a better way of ordering the story or information in the story for these events instead of making 20 some odd threads for each group of npcs. I know I get asked by others if I know whats going on story wise at times and I normally say no, even if I've read it sometimes it's just hard to tell whats really going on or where the story direction is.

As i stated im not trying to upset the writers or anything or say that all of the writing is bad but you asked for feedback and thats my honest feedback ^^;

[Suzerain of Sheol]

Oh, no, you don't need to worry about offending anyone -- well, me at least, can't speak for anyone else. I want to hear opinions on how we're doing so we can take that under advisement next time. The idea is to have a story that the users enjoy, so we need to hear from you.

Though... 3-4 event ago... isn't that pretty much all of them? :p

Anyway, thank you for your comments, they're appreciated. :)

[Rosekitten]

Well I think the first event i remember with a story was this event? well last years xD with the npc's everyone is asking to return. I thought that story was fine. I think the 2nd war we had the story seemed to.. take a down hill glide almost. Now the npc's are just all over the place. Maybe certain npcs should only appear during certain events or times instead of trying to get everyone's back story out at once?

[Demonskid]

Falla And Faust are on Toamna it's self guarding the Fati Luxphera like they are supposed to be doing. It didn't break this year so no Falla and Faust.

They aren't dead.. they are just doing their job. ._. on the moon.

This event is to show how the normal Nox Nocturnalis event goes.

Where people pray and stuff.

[Illusion]

I agree completely, I just lose track in the story. There's far to much writing, it would be nice to have a quick round up thread explaining everything that happened in the event when it ends. "This happened, that happened, and now this is happening."

And.. LESS NEW NPC'S. Seriously I can't keep track anymore, try and limit your NPC's man.. It's ok to have a new one every once and a while but like 24 for one event? Geez.. Isn't the goal for writing a book is to slowly introduce characters while telling the great story. And then slowly add characters as the story develops so you don't overload the reader?

Edit:
@DK
Then why did we need new NPC's? x.x... If it was up to me I would be throwing mallets at the writing staff right now.

[Demonskid]

The NPC's from the last even was needed

except Oinari who couldn't get her original part due to her creator having life problems but was able to get a small part at the end just so she doesn't pop out of no where somewhere in the future

there are NO new npc's in this event silly Illu =p

[Illusion]

http://www.trisphee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=6540

Umm.. Cough cough..
Then these are supposed to be.... What then?

[Demonskid]

They were in the original Nox event
they just didn't have avatars

http://trisphee.com/forums/showthrea...235#post103235

[Illusion]

o.e...
Sense when...
....
I'm lost now xD

[Suzerain of Sheol]

I'm not actually sure on that, Illusion (the book comparison), but if you want my personal opinion, I think it's more similar to an RPG campaign setting than a novel. The events aren't so much one encompassing narrative so much as they are slices of time showing off different aspects of the Trisphee universe. That's just the way I see it, though.

Also, summaries are something I'm personally all for, so they should appear at some point.

[Demonskid]

They were there since the FIRST Event

=w= click my link

they just didn't have Avatars back then

[Illusion]

Summaries would be bliss... *Day dreams*
I still don't even understand Taskal Wars all the way through, and I read it all like 3-4 times xD.

@DK
o.o Huh... I don't know what to say about them now, wait yes I do.. WHERE THE HECK WERE THEY ALL THIS TIME? XD

[Demonskid]

on Kalin.. where they still are

the taskal and the fight were on Quesaria -w-

[Illusion]

Since when did everyone went to.....
.......
We seriously need Summaries...