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Mizeria
It's over 9000!
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I would like some Avi Help | #1 | ||
I would like some opinions. Please feel free to rate and/or give advice. | ||||
Posted 06-05-2014, 03:23 AM |
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Espy
Wanderer
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Can't quite figure out what you were going for, unfortunately. Might just be too tired.
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Posted 06-05-2014, 03:28 AM |
Mizeria
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something different
It just feels off to me. (I am also to tired.) "It's in the stars. It's been written in the scars on our hearts. Your head is running wild again, my dear. We still have everythin'. We're not broken, just bent. I'll fix it for us. Our love's enough. " | ||||
Posted 06-05-2014, 03:29 AM |
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Tiva
Lynx Rufus
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take out the second arm of vines only use the one. Also earth spirit has vines.
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Posted 06-05-2014, 03:41 AM |
Mizeria
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leave the side with the flower, or the side without?
"It's in the stars. It's been written in the scars on our hearts. Your head is running wild again, my dear. We still have everythin'. We're not broken, just bent. I'll fix it for us. Our love's enough. " | ||||
Posted 06-05-2014, 03:42 AM |
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Tiva
Lynx Rufus
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with the flower, the other green just looks off.. cause the floaty in space
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Posted 06-05-2014, 03:47 AM |
Umaeril
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Wow, what an original creation! I do not know what I would do with that. I am not good at abstractions. But I do agree with Tiva, however, I think both green vines should come off unless you put some of that green elsewhere. Adding some green, idk...boy I might try those lanterns behind everything and see if that added anything good to the mix, hard to tell. Item is called Xinnian. My gut tells me it would be too much and not quite the right color.
Ok how about taking off the vines and leaving it like that? Or you could see if Iounn could decorate the cross with the green head vine. Or maybe you could add the green leaves from Call of Glory and see if they look ok in the background behind everything. If there is anything that might expand the object at the top into that black, that might help. I used to have a sig. Really. | ||||
Posted 06-05-2014, 11:10 AM |
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Mizeria
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Xinnian is the wrong color. I had tried that last night myself xD
The vine just seemed to ascent the brown nicely. hm I'll take off some items and just save the wing part so we can look at it that way to see what y'all think then. "It's in the stars. It's been written in the scars on our hearts. Your head is running wild again, my dear. We still have everythin'. We're not broken, just bent. I'll fix it for us. Our love's enough. "
Last edited by Mizeria; 06-05-2014 at 09:58 PM.
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Posted 06-05-2014, 09:55 PM |
Poggio
Bald and loving it!
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I really like the abstraction in the first one and feels odd with out the background. I'd take the glow out and try for the glow y flowers instead.
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Posted 06-05-2014, 11:01 PM |
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Mizeria
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the glow from the timelord?
"It's in the stars. It's been written in the scars on our hearts. Your head is running wild again, my dear. We still have everythin'. We're not broken, just bent. I'll fix it for us. Our love's enough. " | ||||
Posted 06-05-2014, 11:05 PM |
Poggio
Bald and loving it!
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yeah try the nox rig. It may blend better then having a glow directly under it.
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Posted 06-05-2014, 11:40 PM |
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Mizeria
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it doesn't give the same effect.
I wanted the effect of it being 'summoned', for lack of better word, through the clock. "It's in the stars. It's been written in the scars on our hearts. Your head is running wild again, my dear. We still have everythin'. We're not broken, just bent. I'll fix it for us. Our love's enough. " | ||||
Posted 06-05-2014, 11:47 PM |
Poggio
Bald and loving it!
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hmm, the magic circle in the love yearly?
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Posted 06-05-2014, 11:55 PM |
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Mizeria
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hmm... that doesn't look right either v.v
"It's in the stars. It's been written in the scars on our hearts. Your head is running wild again, my dear. We still have everythin'. We're not broken, just bent. I'll fix it for us. Our love's enough. " | ||||
Posted 06-06-2014, 12:11 AM |
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