[Madame-Aiko]

Alright, I sent it to the email you designated for me to send to through PM.

[Obsidian]

Originally Posted by Aikko

Oh! My apologies, I'll link you to my Nabyn account then:
http://www.nabyn.com/gallery.php?id=5346
Better?

Yup! Looks great! ^-^

@Illusion; You improved greatly! I agree with the other person about the feather being a bit flat.

[Madame-Aiko]

Thank you! I actually did mine in grayscale than in color, and it was already. I need to get used to it if they hire me at all. I have high hopes but then again I'm trying to ignore it haha.

[ml1201]

@Obsidian
I've been demoted to 'the other person'. T^T Oh well, that's life. XD

[Obsidian]

Originally Posted by ml1201

@Obsidian
I've been demoted to 'the other person'. T^T Oh well, that's life. XD

Awes! I couldn't remember who said it and I was lazy and didn't want to click back to see who said it, lol

*glomps*

Hell, I'm still lazy. XD
I'm laying in bed trying to pixel, lol

[ml1201]

lol, that's okay, I was just being silly. XD *snuggles back* I sometimes forget to reply to a specific person because I get distracted by something or have too many people to reply to. x'D And I don't use my laptop in my bed, last time I was doing that I kept getting a sore leg that made me limp around for months!

[Illusion]

I love it how everyone brought up the feather when I was making the post I was heavily considering writing:

"*P.S. Remake/rework the feather, it needs to be redone badly.*"

Lol. Before I took my nap I actually thought of a crazy design for it, back to square one. xD

Edit:

MOAR experimentation!

[ml1201]

I love how the feathers on the hip and arm look! But the ones on the head doesn't look like that! D: Work your magic and make them look the same. XD

[Obsidian]

Originally Posted by ml1201

lol, that's okay, I was just being silly. XD *snuggles back* I sometimes forget to reply to a specific person because I get distracted by something or have too many people to reply to. x'D And I don't use my laptop in my bed, last time I was doing that I kept getting a sore leg that made me limp around for months!

Hehe, I figured you were playing. And I have a little table beside my bed and I was laying on my side. >->
Made it a little hard to use the quick keys to change from the pencil to the eraser to the dye drop. X]

Originally Posted by Illusion

I love it how everyone brought up the feather when I was making the post I was heavily considering writing:

"*P.S. Remake/rework the feather, it needs to be redone badly.*"

Lol. Before I took my nap I actually thought of a crazy design for it, back to square one. xD

Edit:

MOAR experimentation!

Lookin' better.

[Madame-Aiko]

Originally Posted by Illusion

I love it how everyone brought up the feather when I was making the post I was heavily considering writing:

"*P.S. Remake/rework the feather, it needs to be redone badly.*"

Lol. Before I took my nap I actually thought of a crazy design for it, back to square one. xD

Edit:

MOAR experimentation!

Could I offer a tad bit of friendly critique or help? C:
On the belt I noticed it's just a simple outline. Perhaps instead of using all black, you could use colors a bit darker than the shade inside for each area of the basic line art. Something you always want to do with the lighting on line art is where it hits the light. I try not make all of the line art one basic color, because the light hits those areas too.

[Illusion]

Originally Posted by Aikko

Could I offer a tad bit of friendly critique or help? C:
On the belt I noticed it's just a simple outline. Perhaps instead of using all black, you could use colors a bit darker than the shade inside for each area of the basic line art. Something you always want to do with the lighting on line art is where it hits the light. I try not make all of the line art one basic color, because the light hits those areas too.

*Knows exactly what your talking about but has no idea what your talking about at the same time.*

It's one of those, "I did that so why are you telling me this?" moments.

Would you be so awesome to explain a bit more?

[Madame-Aiko]

Hai! So basically when you sketch, or line whatever you're drawing, you shade whatever you color inside of it, yes?
Sometimes it looks better when you shade the line art according to what you color inside of it as well.
Of course, you want the people to know that the shape is still there, so instead of using one solid black line as a belt outline, you shade the outline a tad darker than the areas inside. Say you were to use white for the inside. You'd want to use a very light, light gray for the outline in that white area.
I hope that makes better sense. ^^'

[Illusion]

Originally Posted by Aikko

Hai! So basically when you sketch, or line whatever you're drawing, you shade whatever you color inside of it, yes?
Sometimes it looks better when you shade the line art according to what you color inside of it as well.
Of course, you want the people to know that the shape is still there, so instead of using one solid black line as a belt outline, you shade the outline a tad darker than the areas inside. Say you were to use white for the inside. You'd want to use a very light, light gray for the outline in that white area.
I hope that makes better sense. ^^'

*Plays around with it*
-Sigh- This is just a difficult item to work on all around.

[Madame-Aiko]

What type of item is it that you're working on?

[Ginger]

YES!!! Possible candidates for pixel artists! *loves on Illu and Aikko*

[Madame-Aiko]

*Beams happily* Someone on another website told me they needed a pixelist here, so here I am.~