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Lin · Posted 07-16-2012, 11:26 AM

so i did a little art of my current avatar and i wanna know what you think of it :D

i want you to be honest ^.^

Espy · Posted 07-17-2012, 03:22 AM

The little bit of hanyu made me smile. The (your) left eye needs to be moved left a bit. Neck needs to be thicker; the cheeks shouldn't be straight like that. They should be curved out. Hair's not too shabby.

Ashy · Posted 07-17-2012, 04:12 AM

id pay to get art like that >.>

Rigel · Posted 07-17-2012, 11:24 AM

It's very cute and I love the colors.

The neck is thin and too long, the eyes are misplaced, and the positioning of the hat makes the forehead look huge. Stylizing quirks are another matter, though, and if that's the way you like to draw, keep it up.

Lin Lazy		What do you think ?	#1
	so i did a little art of my current avatar and i wanna know what you think of it :D i want you to be honest ^.^ My Vary First Quest IS DONE :D
		Posted 07-16-2012, 11:26 AM

		#2	Espy Wanderer
The little bit of hanyu made me smile. The (your) left eye needs to be moved left a bit. Neck needs to be thicker; the cheeks shouldn't be straight like that. They should be curved out. Hair's not too shabby. STONEWALL WAS A RIOT \|playlist\| Step in front of a runaway train ____Just to feel alive again â•â•â•â•â•â•â•? ?•â•â•â•â•â• Dark 3.24.12 - Nick 6.4.12 - Henry 12.7.12 - Elliot & Rajat 3.28.16 sanctuary\|\|Closet\|\|~~Art Request~~ â•â•â•â•â•â•â•? ?•â•â•â•â•â• Pushing forward through the night_____ Aching chest and blurry sight
	Posted 07-17-2012, 03:22 AM

		#4	Rigel Lyricist
It's very cute and I love the colors. The neck is thin and too long, the eyes are misplaced, and the positioning of the hat makes the forehead look huge. Stylizing quirks are another matter, though, and if that's the way you like to draw, keep it up. 　　　　 Rigel's a star. You can find me on: ficpress + tumblr + last.fm ✦ GROUP FOR WRITERS & BOOKWORMS
	Posted 07-17-2012, 11:24 AM

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