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If gal doesn't retire to bed right this instant she will not see Kimiko! (My Oc)
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Old Posted 09-07-2012, 07:47 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #866   Gallagher Gallagher is offline
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I'm judging this character already! If they are not Japanese in some way or their parents directly influenced, that name is unacceptable!







Old Posted 09-07-2012, 07:53 AM Reply With Quote  
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Aye well her Grandmother was Japanese and gave her that name though her herself doesn't look much japanese
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Old Posted 09-07-2012, 07:56 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #868   Gallagher Gallagher is offline
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... You win this round.

But seriously, that's a nice name. Makes me think of Rugrats, though.







Old Posted 09-07-2012, 07:59 AM Reply With Quote  
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Well, i got it originally tbh for an old cartoon/anime i used to watch named Xiaolin Showdown.

Just and fyi though i dont detail as much as you do when it comes to date of birth and all of that because i leave that open, Because i join mostly fantasy type role plays that have varying timelines
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Old Posted 09-07-2012, 08:03 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #870   Gallagher Gallagher is offline
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Lol, are you kidding? I do those all the time, too. I just have a base profile to work from so the character changes are uniform, instead of getting more and more twisted from what he originally was.

I can't even remember what year he SUPPOSED to be born in, aha.







Old Posted 09-07-2012, 08:06 AM Reply With Quote  
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Well, i guess i can just throw in a place of birth and stuff i just don't see the use for it in my opinion
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Old Posted 09-07-2012, 08:08 AM Reply With Quote  
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Little details like that really aren't something that should be thought up asap. Details like I have are built up over years. I do try to be reasonable when it comes to looking at new characters, you know. Gawd.







Old Posted 09-07-2012, 08:11 AM Reply With Quote  
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Well, would gal like to look at what i have so far?
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Old Posted 09-07-2012, 08:14 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #874   Gallagher Gallagher is offline
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Very much so, yes. -bounces-







Old Posted 09-07-2012, 08:16 AM Reply With Quote  
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Note that i know it needs more work and im no where near finished.



sorry for the weird pacing i have to use note pad /:
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Last edited by Natsunaine; 09-07-2012 at 08:24 AM.
Old Posted 09-07-2012, 08:21 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #876   Gallagher Gallagher is offline
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Haha, I use notepad for, like, everything, dude.

The "She is also verry talented at Parcor, Gymnastics,Judo." seems a little much with how young she is. Personally, I'd cut out one, and for the role you're going for, gymnastics seems the best bet. When you play her with a couple more years on her, then add it back on.

I like the hair pin detail. Was she close with her grannie?

OH GOD. ANSWER ME, AND I'LL REPLY WHEN I WAKE UP.







Old Posted 09-07-2012, 08:27 AM Reply With Quote  
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Le gasp i only had one thing the gala disagreed with i must be doing something right XDD

I removed the gymnastics, i guess your right about that i really didn't think that one through with her age and all

Aye there were close she considers her grandmother her actual mother but thats giving a bit to much away. her original name was Kimberley, but as it says in the Skele her grandmother requested her to change it to Kimiko :3
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Old Posted 09-07-2012, 08:32 AM Reply With Quote  
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Hm.. -le gasp- You stealing one of my OCs name D: Your soooo evil, Natsu..

I'm joking. lol.. Kim or Kimberly is just an NPC really.. never fleshed her out..

hmm.. all depends really.. Chloe has Japanese in her and she trained in quite a few of the arts, mainly to please her father.. -the scumbag- but I don't think she ever got to master any...
Old Posted 09-07-2012, 10:56 AM Reply With Quote  
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Well i know im evil but what does that have to do with anything >.>
"Cause I've been falling apart in the pouring rain"

"I'm waging war on myself. A captive causality"

""


"Traded a merciful heart for a murderer�s brain
But now I curse what's in my head
Because I can't stop seeing red"
Old Posted 09-07-2012, 11:10 AM Reply With Quote  
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- .-; Why do I bother even trying to tease you?

-gives Natsu a push back into the pool, making sure she's far away enough that he can't grab her ankle-
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