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Plus, the snow should be all nice and watery for spring which means more flowers!

Also, the guy selling both his Xinnians skipped over me and sold them to someone else. *sigh* So i won't need any au. But thank you.
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What the crap, who was it?


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Illusion or some such. XP I just wish I would have gotten ONE, but whoever bought them got both. ;____; Gyah! Oh well. I guess that was enough good fortune for the marketplace, after finding a seller for the aScellus Jacket that DIDn't want just runes. XP

Hello there Lollie. Welcome to our little home. =) How are you?
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Hey there lollie.

Ugh, Pie..grr. Just grr!

Alright, I got this paper to spit out today. It should be much easier then the Milton one thankfully.


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Whoot! I'm at the library, might be off and on a lot today. ilu. <333
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ilu too!

Writing this paper, yyyyayyayayayaya so fun so funsososososofufnfnfn..

not.

Think it's done. Or at least I just don't care to do it anymore. Tell me if you see anything strange?



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It's wonderful Rousi! I love anything about strong women. <3

In the first paragraph, you should combine those first two sentences. It'll be a long sentence, but the second part, although still technically a sentence, is an awkward one. "Hippolita can only blame herself and struggle with her delicacy in ways unknown and or more correctly not willingly understood by a modern woman." You should put a comma after "and" and "correctly" so that it reads, "Hippolita can only blame herself and struggle with her delicacy in ways unknown and, or more correctly, not willingly understood by a modern woman."

"He, just as many of the female characters throughout these novels are, is blind." This is a good sentence, but the way that it's broken up leads to some mental tripping over a step. "Are" and "is" are two subject-agreement words that get mixed up all the time, and although they are used correctly, having them right next to each other makes you sort of go, "wait, what?" My recommendation would to not break up the phrases, so it would read along the lines of, "Just as many of the female characters throughout these novels are, he is blind."

Everything else looks beautimous! You're gonna knock his socks off!

Brb, dinner
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Girl! Shoooot! Don't you know I went and forgot you were online.

I SOWWY!

And! Thank you for looking! I trust your advice. :)


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This ones actually for my other english class. YAY!


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Lol, it's fine! I had just enough time to pop on, read the essay, write a response, and then dinner was done. XD

You're gonna kick butt with that. <33

How was your day, other than writing the above?
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I vacuumed, cleaned the litter box, did the dishes, showered, spent a little time on the treadmill and...that's about it..other then this paper.

I switched a few things..the first and last paragraphs really. One last look over and i'll leave you alone for the night on the topic of this paper.

The gothic novel is a genre ripe with archetypes, be it the overflow of the sublime landscape, the affluence and domination of the male figures or, the lack of backbone the females of the time appeared to have. Time and time again, when reading any book in this genre, you will be inundated with a flood of feminine helplessness as well as male invulnerability. That is until you meet Maria De Vellorno and Ferdinand, son of the marquis, both key figures in Radcliffe’s “A Sicilian Romance.”

Marie De Vellorno is playing with her stature in her era while Ferdinand is almost like a shrinking violet, which is to say that he plays more the usual objectified role of the female. De Vellorno is not a good person or a good example of femininity to say the least. And Ferdinand, while without a doubt far more moral a person then De Vellorno he is not the norm. However, both of these characters are without a doubt characters who stand out amongst the crowd. They just don’t fit the standard mold.

I feel like my paper didn't just focus on HER so I made the thesis and wrap up include Ferdinand as well.


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I think it could work either way, but I personally like the second edit you did better. <33
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<3 WATCH THIS!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r2PM0om2El8

and after you watch, I gotta go cause I gotta read like 100 pages of this book before bed, lawl. I am alllmost caught back up with my classes tho. Thank goodnes.s.


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Aww, alright. <33 Go tackle that book and I'll watch the video. <3 Sleep well!
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<33

I put a link to the order of the books in the book thread.

Miss you! We'll play catch up soon. <3 Thank you for being supersuper!


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