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Suzerain of Sheol
Desolation Denizen
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Hmm... forgot about my own topic.
Well, I'll have to make up for it. Here's two, both of them about Lucifer the Morning star. I find something romantically baroque about the myth of his Fall. In Victory's Garden In Purest Plummet Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers. | ||||
Posted 05-25-2011, 09:56 PM |
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Suzerain of Sheol
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This one, for the record, has nothing to do with my username, beyond my like of the word, I suppose. It's about the sociological force of religion over human history.
Suzerain Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers. | ||||
Posted 05-28-2011, 10:51 PM |
Suzerain of Sheol
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I wrote this one today. It's rather odd, being a single sentence over twenty lines long, but I think it flows well enough that that isn't a problem. I wrote it on a whim, musing on the perspective of a stillborn child. 'Cause that's a normal thing to do.
Biography of a Stone Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers. | ||||
Posted 06-01-2011, 10:25 PM |
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Fiyero
The Vampire Slayer
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I enjoyed reading your poetry!
What I read was all rather good. | ||||
Posted 06-02-2011, 04:55 PM |
Suzerain of Sheol
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I appreciate you commenting. Thank you for the compliment. :)
Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers. | ||||
Posted 06-02-2011, 06:47 PM |
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Suzerain of Sheol
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Consolation and a Marble Lamb
Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers. | ||||
Posted 06-08-2011, 10:43 AM |
Suzerain of Sheol
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Wow, has it really been a month since I last wrote a poem?
Momentary Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers. | ||||
Posted 07-11-2011, 01:25 AM |
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Suzerain of Sheol
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Hallowing the Hollow
Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers. | ||||
Posted 07-19-2011, 12:13 AM |
Suzerain of Sheol
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Settlement
Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers. | ||||
Posted 07-21-2011, 12:15 AM |
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Lost_Muse
Two Fish
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Your poetry is good, way better then mine will every be. Savour This and Choking on Roses would have to be my two favorites. I do enjoy Salvation as well, to me it sounds like death is talking to his latest conquest, while Cardiophage reminds me of the tale of Apollo and Daphne, but that just me.
Anyway I'm going to go and hide in my cave now. Bye. | ||||
Posted 07-21-2011, 01:59 AM |
Quiet Man Cometh
We're all mad here.
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Your prolificness makes me jealous Suzerain. I'm still fighting with my apoc. poem and nothing new has yet struck my fancy. I've rewritten a couple poems not to my liking and have yet another shell of a potential poem with nothing of substance to put in it.
Want to trade a couple unfinished pieces and see if we can work through them? :p. | ||||
Posted 07-21-2011, 05:03 AM |
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Suzerain of Sheol
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Haha. We have very different poem-writing-processes, Quiet. Mine come very organically, never taking more than an hour to write. To use George Martin's analogy, gardening vs. architecture. Which is ironic, because I'm definitely an architect when it comes to stories.
And, Lost Muse, thank you for the comments. It's always nice to know someone's reading. :) Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers. | ||||
Posted 07-21-2011, 10:39 AM |
Quiet Man Cometh
We're all mad here.
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Haiku are organic for me, but most poems are usually a mix. What drives me nuts is when I have, let's say, a growing wildflower that is too small to survive yet and needs some non-organic help. I can leave it be for who knows how long for it to finish on it's own, or I can try to nudge things along. That's where "Post" is right now.
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Posted 07-22-2011, 02:27 AM |
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Suzerain of Sheol
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Should I know what "Post" is? I can't remember anything you showed me or mention with that title.
Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers. | ||||
Posted 07-22-2011, 11:01 AM |
Suzerain of Sheol
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This... sounded better in my head. :|
A Private Apophasis Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers. | ||||
Posted 08-04-2011, 12:53 AM |
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