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Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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Wow, I don't think I've ever killed someone with a poem before. I don't know if I should be honored or horrified.
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 12-14-2015, 04:56 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #242   Espy Espy is offline
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por que no los dos :|
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Old Posted 12-14-2015, 04:59 AM Reply With Quote  
Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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Nihilism? Check. Space and God imagery? Check. Overly-long, pretentious, incomprehensible musing on the zero-sum of human existence? Check, check, and triple check.

Oh, look. It's a Suze poem.

Confusing the Psychopomp

Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 02-10-2016, 05:37 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #244   Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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"Let's try to write a prose poem! There's no way that could possibly go wrong!"

Every Third Star {M}

Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 02-29-2016, 09:34 PM Reply With Quote  
Quiet Man Cometh Quiet Man Cometh is offline
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So shared our little poetic exchange at my last poetry meeting. Two people seemed to find it fascinating. I may have broken the other two.
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Default   #246   Espy Espy is offline
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Is...is that good, or bad? (I initially typed that as "good, or good", and then went "....wait a second.")
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If there's no more mystery to misery, Suze, that's because you've turned it into a fine art.
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Default   #248   Espy Espy is offline
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Who says fine arts can't have a healthy dose of mystery :|
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Old Posted 03-13-2016, 12:27 AM Reply With Quote  
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Our crushing march toward the singularity, obviously, Espy. Soon, the sublime and the numinous will be laid bare for the meager, mechanical formulae they are. Let the delusions born of ephemeral qualia be cast asunder! Let us behold, stark and austere, the pitiless truth of the cosmos! Not a change of state, but merely one of perspective. We are not who we think we are.

NIHIL COGITAT, NIHIL EST!
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 03-13-2016, 02:28 PM Reply With Quote  
Default   #250   Espy Espy is offline
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....I may have had the sudden mental image of Tsae, Cel, Skaeye, and Mercille as the four horsemen...
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Old Posted 03-13-2016, 03:46 PM Reply With Quote  
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Default   #251  
You have odd thoughts :P

(but you should totally draw that)
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 03-13-2016, 06:56 PM Reply With Quote  
Default   #252   Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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Hostis Humani Generis

Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 06-19-2016, 07:48 PM Reply With Quote  
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Default   #253  
Had to read it over a few times before the first two stanzas really connected with the rest. (I really like the fourth full stanza <.<;; As well as the first two.)

...

Cripes, why is this one so easy to relate to.
STONEWALL WAS A RIOT

Old Posted 06-19-2016, 07:57 PM Reply With Quote  
Default   #254   Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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That is a very good question, Espy. :P
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 06-19-2016, 08:31 PM Reply With Quote  
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Post post post post, posty post post.

Post.

Who are we relating to? The poet, the surgeon, or the narrator abortion priest?
Last edited by Quiet Man Cometh; 06-20-2016 at 02:47 AM.
Old Posted 06-20-2016, 01:45 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #256   Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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Well I personally relate to all three, but then, I wrote the thing....
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
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