[Vincent]

Maybe add something purple on the big chunk of black on the chest part? Also the brownish smoke cloud thing kinda... just doesn't seem to belong there. XD

[Umaeril]

Your avi looks great, I like the red in the coat and that it is in the middle with black all around it. Not much you can do to improve on that. But you could stand on something black to balance the black behind your figure. There are 2 items with black platforms to stand on. One is Looming Nightmare and the other is....um...hmmmm. Wicked Abomination I think is the name. Anyhow, that is all I would add...if that. You really did a good job with just a few items.

[Kilala Mikal]

Love your av as usual, Uma dear! I would try to use a different hair color though... While the messy buns are one of my favorites, there's just something about the non-purple coloring that doesn't really seem to go with the rest of your av, it's too dark. Maybe try Lavender, or lilac, or even coral (the blondish pose?)... Possibly the yellow pose of the Faded Messy Buns?

[Umaeril]

Omg Kilala, you are spot on. I tried so many different hair styles, but none satisfied and I just gave up. But really good point.

Ok there is one thing I would do with yours as it is right now and that is add a touch of gold lower down. You have a lot with the hairband, but it is up high. I am not sure if your avi is themed so I am not sure what to suggest. If they had better anklets here then something thin like an anklet would do. You do not want a lot. Alternatively, you can use something like that lion tamer gold whip to carry gold all the way down to the foot area without having to add accessories.

[Awen Moonshine]

There is certainly a lot going on, but the overall colour scheme works well. I am not sure what I could suggest to improve other than possibly get yourself a nose? ^_^;;

[jaguarlyra]

Try to put something the sky , it's kind of unbalanced right now.

[Awen Moonshine]

Better? (I only joined today so please bear with)

Yours is really good. I like the use of monotones and it works really well apart from the skirt being visible outside of the robe boundries. Other than small glitch it is damned near perfect!

[Lawtan]

I like it!
There are a few items (One is the Beta Style, found in the crane game, along with chances of other items and aurum) that give a full-background color. But, you seem to be doing well with the items.

[Awen Moonshine]

Thank you! I'm guessing you are supposed to be Howl from Howls Moving Castle...? If so it looks awesome! (Howls Moving Castle is my favourite Ghibli movie) And you even have a little Calcifer <3

[Lawtan]

Yes, I am. I admit I prefer Princess Mononoke, but Howl's Moving Castle (Calcifer) made me laugh a ton at a time things were bad, so... :D

(As a note, may want to avoid derailing the thread - we have a movie discussion section, and as long as it adds something new to the thread, reviving threads is okay! \o/ )

[Gallagher]

Digging the avi, Law. The only thing I would say is to add depth to the face with more layers, maybe a bit more color to the mouth by layering a simple set of lips under your current one, just off of your base color so it shows up. You could use some eyebrows, but if none are to your liking for the expression, don't force it. Consider old hairs that have built in eyebrows, too. And speaking of hair, I like the layering you have, but I would try to match the colors better. Right now you look like you're using gold and either a very dull basic yellow, or a very light basic brown. Your background is brilliant. The only thing I would do different is try to cover up the bottom of your ice more so you couldn't see that hard edge under the trees, but I'm not sure if we have any good items for that.

[jaguarlyra]

Unless it is on purpose I think changing all of your hair to the same color would look good.

[Rusted Tampon]

I was thinking about what it would look like without the long skirt, and replace with black pants? Other than that though nice layering, and I like how you used tattoos and accessories as clothing accents.

[Tiva]

I think a stand to make it seem like the cake isn't floating straight in the air would add a sense of completeness to it.

Jag: That is Galla's 'thing' aka on of their OCs

[Dorian Pavus]

Uh, what is the goo arm in the middle there? Why is it where, I'm not sure. Maybe take that off? O u O

[Den]

I don't know if they have any staves, 'cause that's all I really think your av needs, Lillium. :)