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Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
Desolation Denizen
Default   #17  
So feeble. Sirocco only burned the planet to a crisp. :P
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 08-15-2012, 07:39 PM  
Default   #18   Quiet Man Cometh Quiet Man Cometh is offline
We're all mad here.
I liked Kaym's little 'rebirth' moment. I'm curious to see what Ryuko's new idea of an angel will be.
Old Posted 08-17-2012, 04:16 AM  
Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
Desolation Denizen
Default   #19  
Posting here just to note, again, that a new scene has been added to the event story. :)
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 08-20-2012, 01:31 PM  
Default   #20   Belial Belial is offline
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I think if you can put an image of what is going on in the readers head, you've done a really good job. Nice use of tags throughout it all, it wasn't overly descriptive but not so bare as to be stripped to the bare bones.

The ending made me want to read more and there is nothing else so far.
Le sad.
Old Posted 08-28-2012, 03:49 PM  
 


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