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littl3chocobo
isn't that funny
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i can only see three notable things, one, the far foot is rather pointed and underdeveloped, maybe give it a little more shape to match the others? and two, the sword/hand, the way he is holding his arm and gripping he has no weight being applied but the sword is very large, at a rough angle to balance and is most likely quite heavy, maybe you could either show him exerting a little more effort or else move/change the sword to match the lax hold. the third is the same arm >>; that line in the elbo should not be there, it makes it look as if the arm is pointing away from the viewer(that is we can see the back of the elbow not the inside of the arm)
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Posted 03-29-2012, 05:49 AM