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Forum: Art & Writing 01-31-2012, 02:47 AM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
Thank you. That poem was originally just going to...

Thank you. That poem was originally just going to be expression, the shift was added not after I wrote it, but really following the image. Thank you, I thought it was clever. I've written a few poems...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-31-2012, 01:49 AM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
I agree with you. He recalls the details a little...

I agree with you. He recalls the details a little strongly for being maddeningly out of his mind.
Forum: Art & Writing 01-27-2012, 12:36 AM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
Short Story And I Dropped And I...

Short Story

And I Dropped


And I dropped. I could hear the silent squeal of adrenaline coursing through me; the blood was pumping so hard I could feel the pulse of my heart in my eyes. All...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-26-2012, 08:54 PM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
Thank you. I appreciate the compliments. I think...

Thank you. I appreciate the compliments. I think simply put just needs stronger imagery about halfway through the beginning.
Forum: Art & Writing 01-26-2012, 08:24 PM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
Here are a few other pieces. Simply...

Here are a few other pieces.



Simply Put

This is not a poem.

Simply put, these are my expression.
These words are like blood, teeth, and sweat that I have chewed, choked, and lived on...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-26-2012, 04:20 PM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
Thank you, my dear, its one of my favorites as...

Thank you, my dear, its one of my favorites as well.
Forum: Art & Writing 01-25-2012, 06:30 PM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
Yes, that and the description of the environment...

Yes, that and the description of the environment can really be completely taken out. Will do. Thank you for reading it.
Forum: Art & Writing 01-25-2012, 06:20 PM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
The rest of the piece suffers miserably, I agree...

The rest of the piece suffers miserably, I agree with you entirely. I haven't read this in years, since I wrote it. Which was two years ago, probably in december-ish. I greatly appreciate the...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-25-2012, 12:55 AM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
Sounds a bit like Dante's Inferno, which I still...

Sounds a bit like Dante's Inferno, which I still have never read. I've always been interested in the angelic hierarchy and the concept of fallen angels. I actually wrote a story about one. In fact,...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-25-2012, 12:44 AM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
You seem to have a fascination with Lucifer in...

You seem to have a fascination with Lucifer in specific. I'll have to check out Draconian. I believe I've heard of Paradise Lost before. I'll have to check it out. There is a band that this reminded...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-25-2012, 12:36 AM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
Ah. Nope. I don't really read poetry. Which...

Ah. Nope. I don't really read poetry. Which explains much of the repetitive style and lack of structural ingenuity. That's a though, maybe I should read more poetry... hmmm...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-25-2012, 12:25 AM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
With bated breath. No clue what Milton is, though.

With bated breath. No clue what Milton is, though.
Forum: Art & Writing 01-24-2012, 10:47 PM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
This is a short story from my past. And...

This is a short story from my past.

And reality came back to me.
I stood in the darkness there, alone in a room that was nearly pitch-black. I was scared and lonely. I was confused because I had...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-24-2012, 07:40 PM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
Interesting. Ashes are a commonly unpleasant...

Interesting. Ashes are a commonly unpleasant image to me. I will certainly examine my usage of the word more. If it means anything, Arsis is the name of a gateway to hell, supposedly a volcano in the...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-24-2012, 06:51 PM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
FOUND IT. YES. It's not very good. No where near...

FOUND IT. YES. It's not very good. No where near as good as I remembered. Oh well.


We

The many days we searched
Under shadows of wings
Blinded by the halos of light
Stained black in ashes...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-24-2012, 06:40 PM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
Well, that's because I'm broad. It's more an...

Well, that's because I'm broad. It's more an attempt at ambiguity than it is clever.

Interesting comments though.

"My Arsis" does it's job.

"In the end of things..." the third repetition...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-24-2012, 06:26 PM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
I have. I don't often; for some reason block...

I have. I don't often; for some reason block style is how my mind works. When I do stanza's its generally completed thoughts. Most of these posts were incomplete and unexpressed at the time of their...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-24-2012, 06:18 PM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
Here are three more. All of these poems,...

Here are three more. All of these poems, including the previously posted, are old. I haven't written poetry in more than a year.



My Arsis


Wed follow you through hell,
If we knew you...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-24-2012, 06:15 PM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
I'm not sure how to fix the ending of "Words...

I'm not sure how to fix the ending of "Words Don't Hurt", though I agree with you. I'm not really sure how to describe the end result of being truly wounded by words.

"Soulless Wayfarer" is the...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-24-2012, 05:56 PM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
And answering your questions, I've been writing...

And answering your questions, I've been writing poetry for 3 years, mostly during my stay in England and travels throughout Europe and Africa. I too switch between writing poetry and fictional short...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-24-2012, 05:49 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 41
Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
I have a collection of about 80 some odd poems, I...

I have a collection of about 80 some odd poems, I would be happy to post more. I just wanted to hear what you thought of these first.

Here are a couple:




Words Don't Hurt

They say that...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-23-2012, 10:35 PM
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
Thank you. I have a tendency to be abstract and...

Thank you. I have a tendency to be abstract and purposeless in my writing. Though meaningless, I tend to excel in imagery and rhythm, and lack structure and overall substance.

I would appreciate...
Forum: Art & Writing 01-23-2012, 10:09 PM
Replies: 40
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Posted By Arsis_von_Neaera
My Poetry

It's been a while since I've done poetry.

These are old. We'll see how this goes.


Hell Bent

Hell bent
On the thresh of flesh
Between the soul and skin
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