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Conversation Between CycloneKira and littl3chocobo
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    01-17-2016 01:28 AM
    CycloneKira
    Your writing style's great :)
    Capitalization is not a big deal, I make mistakes from time to time too. I think I am pretty consistent in my writing and if there are any other issues I'm sure they'll be corrected soon (you seem like a pretty seasoned writer)
    Also, I am capable of making longer posts if need be. You do a minimum of two paragraphs a post, right?
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    01-16-2016 07:24 PM
    littl3chocobo
    the first page XD i did look at the last page and your writing is much improved. you still write in fragments but they are not nearly so hard to ignore since they at least make contextual sense within the paragraph and are long enough not to cause hard staggering in the flow


    well, if we could refrain from google(which is against the rules on this site anyway) i could totally give it a go, first though, is my writing style acceptable;
    http://www.a-new-horizon.com/index.p...he-hounds.238/

    i have no issue making shorter posts(i do like speed and these take up to an hour to make) but i am not able to do much longer without adding a lot of filler, i do require context and consistency but i do not require lots of research(unless it is non-fantasy, then you do need to have some idea of what you are talking about, haha. i do not use capitals on principal
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    01-16-2016 08:55 AM
    CycloneKira
    I don't have to use a picture. I just describe them using words sometimes. About the sentence fragments... I don't know XP
    I'm pretty sure my writing style has changed since then. Did you just see the first page or some of the last ones?
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    01-15-2016 03:35 AM
    littl3chocobo
    well, it is not my style, you write mostly in sentence fragments and i am against stealing images off of google x______x sorry
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    01-14-2016 03:01 AM
    CycloneKira
    Totally! Here's a sample: Be Safe
    It's not on this site, but yeah.
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    01-14-2016 02:31 AM
    littl3chocobo
    can you do third-person pov and can you do past-present tense? if you can then link me a sample of your stuff and i will totally consider it<3
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    01-13-2016 09:22 AM
    CycloneKira
    Say, are you up to starting a new one? I have some new ones on other sites and I'm looking to RP more on this site too.
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    01-13-2016 05:20 AM
    littl3chocobo
    it's easy enough to do! XD like reading a good book only with the benefit of being able to tell the charas off if they start doing something you are not wanting them to do hahahah
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    01-12-2016 10:19 AM
    CycloneKira
    Same here haha. I try to post as much as possible. I'm almost addicted ^^'
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    01-12-2016 04:52 AM
    littl3chocobo
    when i am active(that is i have active partners) i can do a few dozen posts a day, when noone is up to post i dont post at all XD it really depends
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