[littl3chocobo]

hm, it has a lot of potential, though the first part is too hurried and fragmented to the extreme in the first paragraph though it sits well in the second. the last two are nicely placed though. my only catch is you use words that, while being /correct/, are not exactly fitting for the situation, your cat has an eclectic vocabulary

though i have a weird question, how would the cat know it was a vampire and that it was risking consumption by drawing near, the thought seems oddly human with all of the back-knowledge one would need to articulate that sentance the way your cat did