[littl3chocobo]

well for one it does not match with my own, for two it is hard to tell when something is happening since all of it is written as happening in the instance it is written with no respect for time and third because it triggers my reading issues and mangles up all the words into a pile. i have to strain and read very slowly(sometimes out loud) to read it


of course the unofficial but obvious reason is also that it's the hallmark of someone writing a book with pictures in it which require overt and immediate narration for a very young audience