[littl3chocobo]

red is where i have added, blue is where i have altered, i can explain why if you have any questions, sorry though that this is the only way i know how to help, my grandmother is an english teacher and my mom is ocd(like me) so we are a family of 'do it right or do it over' XD

It seemed like the tent was getting packed. he wondered if there Was were there even that many people in the small town they lived in. Finding it hard to believe that people from the next town would come over just for this circus show, Nick shrugged it off.

Checking his phone, the brunette silently made a small wish hoped the show would start soon. He knew he shouldn't stray from home for too long...