[littl3chocobo]

make it thinner so it does not go straight from his sternum to his jaw, there is no collarbone and the neck is too thick

a corset tightens and holds the body to a shape, your corset just hands loosely off of him like a teeshirt, it should look like this; http://i485.photobucket.com/albums/r...corsetside.jpg

also his hair is about twice that length