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The girl and the flower
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littl3chocobo
isn't that funny
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i think it could either be improved with having a note made of the continuing beauty of the rose or the girl being infected with initiative or remorse that inspires her to grow as a person that way the story feels more completed but as it stands neither the rose not the girl has an ending really
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Posted 08-12-2012, 06:52 AM