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yep, aka tomorrow. LOL-

I'm cooking now, i'm hungry orz




Old Posted 11-22-2012, 11:42 PM Reply With Quote  
Default   #18   Taki Taki is offline
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yes~

ooh, what are you making?


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new comic by pachi.
go check it out. ñ 3ñ
Old Posted 11-22-2012, 11:43 PM Reply With Quote  
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just come congee. |D we're out of cooked rice.




Old Posted 11-23-2012, 12:03 AM Reply With Quote  
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aha |D was it good?


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new comic by pachi.
go check it out. ñ 3ñ
Old Posted 11-23-2012, 01:18 AM Reply With Quote  
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the only advice I can give you is that even the best art can not save you if you have a bad story. Its kinda the skeleton that brings the art to life. So make sure you have alot of things worked out and flushed.
Old Posted 11-23-2012, 01:31 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #22   pachi pachi is offline
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yup, I also need to work on the scripting and pacing. |D;;
making people help me with that lolol. other details I have planned but it'll be a good while before I'm even able to execute them.


congee is average, takikikiki. b:




Old Posted 11-23-2012, 01:37 AM Reply With Quote  
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My only other thing is that even pages with just two people talking need a little dynamism. I would trying playing around with face shots next time you have pages of just too people talking, perhaps a close up of the main characters expression or something.
Old Posted 11-23-2012, 01:47 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #24   pachi pachi is offline
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yep, trying that for later pages. these recent ones have actually been sitting on my comp for a few months now. OTL




Old Posted 11-23-2012, 01:58 AM Reply With Quote  
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XD haha So I just realized I watched your blog.
So what is the over all arching idea of your comic?
Old Posted 11-23-2012, 02:05 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #26   pachi pachi is offline
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orly? 8D


It's... well, there's two sides of the story, one half following yomi and what he does with EON and the other following biido on his search for his verinum. They'll cross eventuallyyyy- at like, the end of arc 2 LOL. can't give away much more than that right now. b:




Old Posted 11-23-2012, 02:14 AM Reply With Quote  
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Yeah I started watching your blog when I first joined tris about two years ago.

Hmmm and who are these people?
Old Posted 11-23-2012, 02:19 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #28   pachi pachi is offline
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hohoho glad to hear. 8)

biido and yomi. biido's not officially introduced until chapter 2 which will take 5ever ~~~

/cries




Old Posted 11-23-2012, 02:23 AM Reply With Quote  
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XD ah it makes a bit more sense when I read the prologue. I thought it just started from chapter one. And yeah the pacing is a bit off.
Old Posted 11-23-2012, 02:27 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #30   pachi pachi is offline
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chapter 1 is pretty slow, chapter 2 will probably be kind of slow too, but it'll pick up from there.

this one-page-at-a-time deal isn't working wonders for the pacing either rofllll. it's supposed to be consumed a chapter at a time. "orz




Old Posted 11-23-2012, 02:30 AM Reply With Quote  
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Even though its a page at a time have you thought about doing over all thumbnails for an entire chapter?
Old Posted 11-23-2012, 02:41 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #32   pachi pachi is offline
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all the pages for chapter 1 are sketched/storyboarded, but I have to make a few adjustments to the coming pages. andddd yeah. I intend to sketch each chapter out before actually drawing them. "orz




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