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#FFFFFF · Posted 10-01-2010, 03:27 PM

I always forget about this thread for some reason. xD I guess I just don't expect people to post in here.

#FFFFFF · Posted 10-01-2010, 03:28 PM

Dark

I walked closer and closer near,
Reluctantly staring into the mir.
I don't know why this scares me so much,
I pull my hand up, my face, I have to touch.
My fingers scrape the reflection on the glass,
I look down, not wanting to remember my past.
The features on my face are no longer clear,
Just a dark silhoutte staring back from the mir.
I take a step back, not believing it was me,
But the reflection moved as I did, Directly.
I just stared at the darkness I despised,
The darkness, only I could see, no one else realized.
This was always something I never wanted,
My spirit, saddly, has always been haunted.
The voices in my head continue to break me down,
They bring me to my knees- to the cold ground.
I continue to stare, the mirror taunting my being,
I can't look away, even though I hate what I'm seeing.
I look down at my hands, it's completely black,
I shake my head, and take a step back.
The mirror no longer shows me lies,
My skin is now as black as night skies.
The truth is now inside- as well as out,
People will look at me and no longer doubt.
Everyone will know I live up to my name,
Dark, what people call me, makes me feel shamed.
But now I am the dark silhouette- defeat,
There's nothing I can do... Now the darkness is complete.

AceValkyrie · Posted 10-03-2010, 02:58 AM

oohhh they are really amazing white <3

#FFFFFF · Posted 10-03-2010, 03:02 AM

Thank you so much!! <333 That means a lot. x]
-Looks for the next one to post-

AceValkyrie · Posted 10-03-2010, 03:02 AM

your welcome X3

#FFFFFF · Posted 10-03-2010, 03:03 AM

[Lifeless]

Hoping, Weeping,
For things that can not be,
Then the lies start seeping,
Still, no one else can see.

Wishing, Dreaming,
For an eternity,
But all you see gleaming,
Is what everyone else can see.

Trembling, Dying,
Afraid of other's sins.
But in the end everyone cries,
Truth be told, no one wins.

Drowning, Hating,
Things are always your fault,
People are waiting,
Spilling the salt.

Whimpering, Rocking,
Now you have your eternity,
All the boats are docking,
But you stay where everyone else can see.

Lifeless, Cold,
Your eternity is death.
You still feel bold,
But, this, no one else can see.

#FFFFFF · Posted 10-03-2010, 04:30 AM

[The Real Me]

The people all say that I have problems,
But I disagree.
They just do not see the real me...

I'm just a unique soul,
At least, that's what mother tells me.
But the sadistic thoughts won't leave me be.
Sometimes I just want to die,
All I can do is sit there and cry.
I go to school with cuts on my arm
The people all whisper, thinking I caused this harm.
But they think right,
It's just not a pretty sight...
People always ask me if I'm okay,
But I never have to say...
Because the answer is always the same.
Most people that judge me & don't even know my name,
I'm tired of the stereotype,
Being like my isn't just a lie.
I have feelings that no one can believe,
My biggest fear is to be decieved,
By the ones I care for the most,
And then sit there and cry as they boast,
About how they killed me inside and out.
Then I can go home and shout,
As I cut on my skin some more,
Basking in the blood and gore...

The people say that I have problems,
And I agree,
Even though they don't see the real me...

Chickenbone · Posted 10-08-2010, 06:41 PM

Yes, I think I've read all these at one point. XD
You know I enjoy your poetry.
I really have to say I love Dark the most out of these. <3

#FFFFFF · Posted 10-08-2010, 06:43 PM

x] Dark and Murderer are my two favorites.
Also, YAY. Someone posted. XD Now I can post another poem.
[/searches for one]

#FFFFFF · Posted 10-08-2010, 06:46 PM

[Smoldering Lies]

Bite my neck and tell me that you love me,
Maybe that will pull me out of my reverie.
But don't say the three words unless you mean them,
If you don't then the words cut like a broken glass rim.
But I'm used to that pain anyway,
Those are the only words, to me, people seem to say.
No one ever means that phrase,
Even though they utter it to me for days.
I know what they really think,
And it makes my heart sink,
To know that people will lie to me like that,
They think they are sneaky as a cat.
But I always know,
And the pain and loneliness seem to grow.
Every time some one lies,
They can come up with the craziest alibis.
So I just stay alone,
Never answering the phone.
Bite my neck and then go to die,
While I lay here in the lies and cry...

Chickenbone · Posted 10-25-2010, 05:21 PM

I really like that one. :D
I wish I could rhyme and it be good like this. Mine sound very forced and not as deep as I could without rhyming.

#FFFFFF · Posted 10-26-2010, 07:41 AM

I enjoy to have them flowing like this very much. <3

#FFFFFF · Posted 01-22-2014, 08:16 PM

Oh my... I should post some of my newer things in here. @_@

#FFFFFF Exp. + 9,000			#17
	I always forget about this thread for some reason. xD I guess I just don't expect people to post in here. [ L ♥ v e ] There's nothing wrong with just a taste of what you paid for...
		Posted 10-01-2010, 03:27 PM

		#18	#FFFFFF Exp. + 9,000
Dark I walked closer and closer near, Reluctantly staring into the mir. I don't know why this scares me so much, I pull my hand up, my face, I have to touch. My fingers scrape the reflection on the glass, I look down, not wanting to remember my past. The features on my face are no longer clear, Just a dark silhoutte staring back from the mir. I take a step back, not believing it was me, But the reflection moved as I did, Directly. I just stared at the darkness I despised, The darkness, only I could see, no one else realized. This was always something I never wanted, My spirit, saddly, has always been haunted. The voices in my head continue to break me down, They bring me to my knees- to the cold ground. I continue to stare, the mirror taunting my being, I can't look away, even though I hate what I'm seeing. I look down at my hands, it's completely black, I shake my head, and take a step back. The mirror no longer shows me lies, My skin is now as black as night skies. The truth is now inside- as well as out, People will look at me and no longer doubt. Everyone will know I live up to my name, Dark, what people call me, makes me feel shamed. But now I am the dark silhouette- defeat, There's nothing I can do... Now the darkness is complete. [ L ♥ v e ] There's nothing wrong with just a taste of what you paid for...
	Posted 10-01-2010, 03:28 PM

AceValkyrie Mythological-Valkyric-Queen of Ace			#19
	oohhh they are really amazing white <3 I am the Typhoon Knight of Chaos I am the Mythological-Valkyric-Queen of Ace Announcement// Stay tuned for an up-coming art shop of mines during the summer. A preview will my provided in my signature. *Quest Log// Coming soon... Current funding's*// 623 Aurum
		Posted 10-03-2010, 02:58 AM

		#20	#FFFFFF Exp. + 9,000
Thank you so much!! <333 That means a lot. x] -Looks for the next one to post- [ L ♥ v e ] There's nothing wrong with just a taste of what you paid for...
	Posted 10-03-2010, 03:02 AM

AceValkyrie Mythological-Valkyric-Queen of Ace			#21
	your welcome X3 I am the Typhoon Knight of Chaos I am the Mythological-Valkyric-Queen of Ace Announcement// Stay tuned for an up-coming art shop of mines during the summer. A preview will my provided in my signature. *Quest Log// Coming soon... Current funding's*// 623 Aurum
		Posted 10-03-2010, 03:02 AM

		#22	#FFFFFF Exp. + 9,000
[Lifeless] Hoping, Weeping, For things that can not be, Then the lies start seeping, Still, no one else can see. Wishing, Dreaming, For an eternity, But all you see gleaming, Is what everyone else can see. Trembling, Dying, Afraid of other's sins. But in the end everyone cries, Truth be told, no one wins. Drowning, Hating, Things are always your fault, People are waiting, Spilling the salt. Whimpering, Rocking, Now you have your eternity, All the boats are docking, But you stay where everyone else can see. Lifeless, Cold, Your eternity is death. You still feel bold, But, this, no one else can see. [ L ♥ v e ] There's nothing wrong with just a taste of what you paid for...
	Posted 10-03-2010, 03:03 AM

#FFFFFF Exp. + 9,000			#23
	[The Real Me] The people all say that I have problems, But I disagree. They just do not see the real me... I'm just a unique soul, At least, that's what mother tells me. But the sadistic thoughts won't leave me be. Sometimes I just want to die, All I can do is sit there and cry. I go to school with cuts on my arm The people all whisper, thinking I caused this harm. But they think right, It's just not a pretty sight... People always ask me if I'm okay, But I never have to say... Because the answer is always the same. Most people that judge me & don't even know my name, I'm tired of the stereotype, Being like my isn't just a lie. I have feelings that no one can believe, My biggest fear is to be decieved, By the ones I care for the most, And then sit there and cry as they boast, About how they killed me inside and out. Then I can go home and shout, As I cut on my skin some more, Basking in the blood and gore... The people say that I have problems, And I agree, Even though they don't see the real me... [ L ♥ v e ] There's nothing wrong with just a taste of what you paid for...
		Posted 10-03-2010, 04:30 AM

		#24	Chickenbone Sexy BokBok
Yes, I think I've read all these at one point. XD You know I enjoy your poetry. I really have to say I love Dark the most out of these. <3 "Look over your hills and be still The sky above us shoots to kill Rain down, rain down on me"
	Posted 10-08-2010, 06:41 PM

#FFFFFF Exp. + 9,000			#25
	x] Dark and Murderer are my two favorites. Also, YAY. Someone posted. XD Now I can post another poem. [/searches for one] [ L ♥ v e ] There's nothing wrong with just a taste of what you paid for...
		Posted 10-08-2010, 06:43 PM

		#26	#FFFFFF Exp. + 9,000
[Smoldering Lies] Bite my neck and tell me that you love me, Maybe that will pull me out of my reverie. But don't say the three words unless you mean them, If you don't then the words cut like a broken glass rim. But I'm used to that pain anyway, Those are the only words, to me, people seem to say. No one ever means that phrase, Even though they utter it to me for days. I know what they really think, And it makes my heart sink, To know that people will lie to me like that, They think they are sneaky as a cat. But I always know, And the pain and loneliness seem to grow. Every time some one lies, They can come up with the craziest alibis. So I just stay alone, Never answering the phone. Bite my neck and then go to die, While I lay here in the lies and cry... [ L ♥ v e ] There's nothing wrong with just a taste of what you paid for...
	Posted 10-08-2010, 06:46 PM

Chickenbone Sexy BokBok			#27
	I really like that one. :D I wish I could rhyme and it be good like this. Mine sound very forced and not as deep as I could without rhyming. "Look over your hills and be still The sky above us shoots to kill Rain down, rain down on me"
		Posted 10-25-2010, 05:21 PM

		#28	#FFFFFF Exp. + 9,000
I enjoy to have them flowing like this very much. <3 [ L ♥ v e ] There's nothing wrong with just a taste of what you paid for...
	Posted 10-26-2010, 07:41 AM

#FFFFFF Exp. + 9,000			#29
	Oh my... I should post some of my newer things in here. @_@ [ L ♥ v e ] There's nothing wrong with just a taste of what you paid for...
		Posted 01-22-2014, 08:16 PM

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