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Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
Desolation Denizen
Default   #17  
Hmm... forgot about my own topic.

Well, I'll have to make up for it. Here's two, both of them about Lucifer the Morning star. I find something romantically baroque about the myth of his Fall.

In Victory's Garden


In Purest Plummet

Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 05-25-2011, 09:56 PM Reply With Quote  
Default   #18   Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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This one, for the record, has nothing to do with my username, beyond my like of the word, I suppose. It's about the sociological force of religion over human history.

Suzerain
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 05-28-2011, 10:51 PM Reply With Quote  
Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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Default   #19  
I wrote this one today. It's rather odd, being a single sentence over twenty lines long, but I think it flows well enough that that isn't a problem. I wrote it on a whim, musing on the perspective of a stillborn child. 'Cause that's a normal thing to do.

Biography of a Stone
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 06-01-2011, 10:25 PM Reply With Quote  
Default   #20   Fiyero Fiyero is offline
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I enjoyed reading your poetry!
What I read was all rather good.


Current quest:Locked Legend (x2)

and yes, Im a man
Old Posted 06-02-2011, 04:55 PM Reply With Quote  
Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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Default   #21  
I appreciate you commenting. Thank you for the compliment. :)
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 06-02-2011, 06:47 PM Reply With Quote  
Default   #22   Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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Consolation and a Marble Lamb
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 06-08-2011, 10:43 AM Reply With Quote  
Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
Desolation Denizen
Default   #23  
Wow, has it really been a month since I last wrote a poem?

Momentary
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 07-11-2011, 01:25 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #24   Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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Hallowing the Hollow

Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 07-19-2011, 12:13 AM Reply With Quote  
Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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Default   #25  
Settlement

Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 07-21-2011, 12:15 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #26   Lost_Muse Lost_Muse is offline
Two Fish
Your poetry is good, way better then mine will every be. Savour This and Choking on Roses would have to be my two favorites. I do enjoy Salvation as well, to me it sounds like death is talking to his latest conquest, while Cardiophage reminds me of the tale of Apollo and Daphne, but that just me.

Anyway I'm going to go and hide in my cave now. Bye.
Old Posted 07-21-2011, 01:59 AM Reply With Quote  
Quiet Man Cometh Quiet Man Cometh is offline
We're all mad here.
Default   #27  
Your prolificness makes me jealous Suzerain. I'm still fighting with my apoc. poem and nothing new has yet struck my fancy. I've rewritten a couple poems not to my liking and have yet another shell of a potential poem with nothing of substance to put in it.

Want to trade a couple unfinished pieces and see if we can work through them? :p.
Old Posted 07-21-2011, 05:03 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #28   Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
Desolation Denizen
Haha. We have very different poem-writing-processes, Quiet. Mine come very organically, never taking more than an hour to write. To use George Martin's analogy, gardening vs. architecture. Which is ironic, because I'm definitely an architect when it comes to stories.

And, Lost Muse, thank you for the comments. It's always nice to know someone's reading. :)
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 07-21-2011, 10:39 AM Reply With Quote  
Quiet Man Cometh Quiet Man Cometh is offline
We're all mad here.
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Haiku are organic for me, but most poems are usually a mix. What drives me nuts is when I have, let's say, a growing wildflower that is too small to survive yet and needs some non-organic help. I can leave it be for who knows how long for it to finish on it's own, or I can try to nudge things along. That's where "Post" is right now.
Old Posted 07-22-2011, 02:27 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #30   Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
Desolation Denizen
Should I know what "Post" is? I can't remember anything you showed me or mention with that title.
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 07-22-2011, 11:01 AM Reply With Quote  
Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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Default   #31  
This... sounded better in my head. :|

A Private Apophasis

Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 08-04-2011, 12:53 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #32   Espy Espy is offline
Wanderer
-stares for a few seconds-

Whoa. Nice...er...turnabout there. althoughitcreepsmeout.
STONEWALL WAS A RIOT

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