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Suzerain of Sheol · Posted 01-27-2012, 02:10 AM

That's a good point. It does seem weak. I haven't worked on this beyond the first time I sat down to write it, so it will need polishing if it does end up being used.

Glad you liked it, though. In case it wasn't obvious, I was drawing inspiration from Gabriel's reaping of the 185,000 men of Sennacherib with the scythe supposedly forged for him for that explicit purpose during the Creation. Which just seems incredibly badass to me.

Arsis_von_Neaera · Posted 01-27-2012, 02:20 AM

Agreed. Incredibly. Have you ever read Lamentations?

Suzerain of Sheol · Posted 01-27-2012, 02:26 AM

No, I don't believe I have. What is that?

Arsis_von_Neaera · Posted 01-27-2012, 02:39 AM

The book of Lamentations, in the Bible. You should, you might enjoy it.

Suzerain of Sheol · Posted 01-27-2012, 02:42 AM

I will do so.

*wonders why he has never heard of such of a thing*

Arsis_von_Neaera · Posted 01-27-2012, 02:46 AM

Pffffft. *coffee spewed all over screen* What?! Your a man?!

Suzerain of Sheol · Posted 01-27-2012, 02:47 AM

o_O Yeah, why? You thought I was a girl?

Arsis_von_Neaera · Posted 01-27-2012, 02:53 AM

No... >.> <.< *ahem* Right, I posted. Do what you will with it.

Suzerain of Sheol · Posted 01-27-2012, 02:58 AM

Right, then.

Well, I'm off for the night. Until the morrow.

Arsis_von_Neaera · Posted 01-27-2012, 04:52 PM

Right, until today. A now of later. All that jazz.

Suzerain of Sheol · Posted 02-12-2012, 02:34 AM

Turmoil in Heaven

kyza · Posted 02-13-2012, 04:19 PM

i like your poem :)

Suzerain of Sheol · Posted 02-13-2012, 04:26 PM

Which one, and why, if you please.

Arsis_von_Neaera · Posted 02-17-2012, 01:46 PM

I feel as though we require more of you, Suze.

Suzerain of Sheol · Posted 02-17-2012, 04:22 PM

How exactly do you mean?

Arsis_von_Neaera · Posted 02-18-2012, 03:59 PM

I believe we need a shrubbery.

Suzerain of Sheol Desolation Denizen			#145
	That's a good point. It does seem weak. I haven't worked on this beyond the first time I sat down to write it, so it will need polishing if it does end up being used. Glad you liked it, though. In case it wasn't obvious, I was drawing inspiration from Gabriel's reaping of the 185,000 men of Sennacherib with the scythe supposedly forged for him for that explicit purpose during the Creation. Which just seems incredibly badass to me. Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers.
		Posted 01-27-2012, 02:10 AM

		#146	Arsis_von_Neaera THIS. IS. SPAR -shot- ... gurgle
Agreed. Incredibly. Have you ever read Lamentations? Maybe it's a condition, ever think of that? No, no you didn't. You never thought, "oh maybe he's sensitive about his invisible eyes." Maybe it's a skin condition. "Maybe she was born with it..."
	Posted 01-27-2012, 02:20 AM

Suzerain of Sheol Desolation Denizen			#147
	No, I don't believe I have. What is that? Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers.
		Posted 01-27-2012, 02:26 AM

		#148	Arsis_von_Neaera THIS. IS. SPAR -shot- ... gurgle
The book of Lamentations, in the Bible. You should, you might enjoy it. Maybe it's a condition, ever think of that? No, no you didn't. You never thought, "oh maybe he's sensitive about his invisible eyes." Maybe it's a skin condition. "Maybe she was born with it..."
	Posted 01-27-2012, 02:39 AM

Suzerain of Sheol Desolation Denizen			#149
	I will do so. wonders why he has never heard of such of a thing Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers.
		Posted 01-27-2012, 02:42 AM

		#150	Arsis_von_Neaera THIS. IS. SPAR -shot- ... gurgle
Pffffft. coffee spewed all over screen What?! Your a man?! Maybe it's a condition, ever think of that? No, no you didn't. You never thought, "oh maybe he's sensitive about his invisible eyes." Maybe it's a skin condition. "Maybe she was born with it..."
	Posted 01-27-2012, 02:46 AM

Suzerain of Sheol Desolation Denizen			#151
	o_O Yeah, why? You thought I was a girl? Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers.
		Posted 01-27-2012, 02:47 AM

		#152	Arsis_von_Neaera THIS. IS. SPAR -shot- ... gurgle
No... >.> <.< ahem Right, I posted. Do what you will with it. Maybe it's a condition, ever think of that? No, no you didn't. You never thought, "oh maybe he's sensitive about his invisible eyes." Maybe it's a skin condition. "Maybe she was born with it..."
	Posted 01-27-2012, 02:53 AM

Suzerain of Sheol Desolation Denizen			#153
	Right, then. Well, I'm off for the night. Until the morrow. Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers.
		Posted 01-27-2012, 02:58 AM

		#154	Arsis_von_Neaera THIS. IS. SPAR -shot- ... gurgle
Right, until today. A now of later. All that jazz. Maybe it's a condition, ever think of that? No, no you didn't. You never thought, "oh maybe he's sensitive about his invisible eyes." Maybe it's a skin condition. "Maybe she was born with it..."
	Posted 01-27-2012, 04:52 PM

Suzerain of Sheol Desolation Denizen			#155
	Turmoil in Heaven This morning is not mine and I wish to weep but the world has run dry I need your sulfur kisses the silent quakes that glass voice your searing caress against tender presumptions I have only this mirror and a dead muse at my feet silence for my inspiration heeding insincere words inhaling abused breath manufacturing a mind rendering art from carrion dreams The window remains splitting the world into selves and I look out to the parting clouds there are God's tears in the rain deaf to the question of sparing the earth abrupt to addressing the inequity avoiding the subject of salience I lie broken on my bed oblivious to shards infatuated with the moment this inheritance I do not own my place of emptiness semantics surrendered obliging the whisper with a waking return There was something here a thought that lived but only I remain my abandoned splendor my life in remnants my testament to the tender mercies of the angel who is beating me to death Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers.
		Posted 02-12-2012, 02:34 AM

		#156	kyza Zombie Platypus
i like your poem :)
	Posted 02-13-2012, 04:19 PM

Suzerain of Sheol Desolation Denizen			#157
	Which one, and why, if you please. Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers.
		Posted 02-13-2012, 04:26 PM

		#158	Arsis_von_Neaera THIS. IS. SPAR -shot- ... gurgle
I feel as though we require more of you, Suze. Maybe it's a condition, ever think of that? No, no you didn't. You never thought, "oh maybe he's sensitive about his invisible eyes." Maybe it's a skin condition. "Maybe she was born with it..."
	Posted 02-17-2012, 01:46 PM

Suzerain of Sheol Desolation Denizen			#159
	How exactly do you mean? Cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion between supposed lovers. Between supposed brothers.
		Posted 02-17-2012, 04:22 PM

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		#160	Arsis_von_Neaera THIS. IS. SPAR -shot- ... gurgle
I believe we need a shrubbery. Maybe it's a condition, ever think of that? No, no you didn't. You never thought, "oh maybe he's sensitive about his invisible eyes." Maybe it's a skin condition. "Maybe she was born with it..."
	Posted 02-18-2012, 03:59 PM