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Seems like everyone else has a place to write. So. Do forgive me if things are rough around the edges.

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It's no secret, I've been obsessed with superheroes as of late. It's not so much the idea of being able to do, well, practically anything you want that I find alluring. Rather, it's all the hardships those people face from just what they are, or because they choose to go out there and help others. So, the next couple of pieces are writings I did to get a feel for the changes my main OC has taken in fitting into this role that I've given him.

Not So Heroic After All



Take Me Home








Old Posted 02-10-2012, 05:58 PM Reply With Quote  
Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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Suppose I should actually say something here. ;)

The way you put your sentences together shows a lot of creativity -- they're not just your run-of-the-mill 'this happened, then that happened' descriptions; they actually build an atmosphere just with the way the words are arranged, and lend a distinct voice to your narrative. You might be surprised how rare it is to see that. So good job. :)

I think that's one of the things a lot of aspiring writers miss, that when you think about building character, the way the story is actually told can go a long way toward establishing their personality, especially in 1st-person. It's something I really like to see, hence, impressed.
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
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I'm glad that you think so. I try and put a lot of thought into the way that I word myself. Having the proper tone means a lot to me. I'd like to do more practice with that, so I can do a wider variety in my writing.

In any case. A new addition for today.

Reality







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Red Calypso Red Calypso is offline
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I'm no good as a critic of writing, but I know when it's good! I love your shorts about Kier, is he from an RP? I'd love to see more about him.
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Default   #8   Gallagher Gallagher is offline
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He's my primary roleplay character, and the one my avatar is based off of, too. My current signature is a section from him... -chuckles- He pretty much makes up my entire world. I don't have much else that's actually worth posting from him though. Except, I guess, a little peek into his head in a different universe than those other selections were done for... Actually, I might want to do more pieces like this. I have a lot of fun with them.

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It's ten in the morning.

My head won't keep quiet.

The Song







Old Posted 04-14-2012, 10:24 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #10   Cecily Hopnotch Cecily Hopnotch is offline
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o.o I love your work. You probably outrank me in the writing department. I want to read more! <3 Well done!
I'm jealous of your poemy skills...
Old Posted 04-21-2012, 01:20 AM Reply With Quote  
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I usually end up writing poems on the fly as a quick release, honestly. Stories I usually get done in a 2 hour or so period, otherwise I don't come back to them... I have a bad habit of that...







Old Posted 04-21-2012, 02:05 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #12   Cecily Hopnotch Cecily Hopnotch is offline
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I have that habit too... which is certainly not helping with the three novels I have on the go. =.= or the fact that my deadline for the latest one is the end of july is I want it published... </3
... I seriously have to start working on that more.

And writing for release is what writing's all about, really!
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... Wow. That sounds like you took on quite a bit there.







Old Posted 04-21-2012, 02:34 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #14   Cecily Hopnotch Cecily Hopnotch is offline
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Yup. Not to mention trying to find a job and trying to get good grades in school... It's a wonder I stay sane.

... I say as I waste half my day on here. Bad Cecily. <_<;;
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-snickers- Very bad indeed.







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Default   #16   Cecily Hopnotch Cecily Hopnotch is offline
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We'll just say that this is my therapy or something and leave it at that. xD *sneaky eyes*
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