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Jessibuns Jessibuns is offline
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Default Cure Me   #1  
I have been blinded.
Blinded by a sight so beautiful.
My lips form your name,
But not a sound escapes.

I just met the boy.
The boy at the end of my dreams.
The boy at the end of the hall.
The boy nobody knows.

Is it possible,
For a boy so beautiful,
To Cure Me?
she/her they/them
old queer
Old Posted 09-16-2010, 09:00 PM Reply With Quote  
Default   #2   Vanitas Vanitas is offline
light always wins
So beautiful and simple. It reminds me of how I used to find a boy so beautiful and no one really paid him much attention or really understood him. This really captures the beginning stages of love or whatever.
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Jessibuns Jessibuns is offline
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Thank you.
(:
she/her they/them
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Old Posted 09-19-2010, 06:16 PM Reply With Quote  
Default   #4   Kotomi Kotomi is offline
Hakuna matata
I'm left with a kind of unfinished feeling, it slightly haunts me (as if it is deeper than just words)
a very nice poem
Old Posted 09-24-2010, 09:09 AM Reply With Quote  
Morgan Morgan is offline
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Lovely!
Comfort always made the rescue, we always hoped "for the best". I'll burn this with torches, and drown in my consideration
"You are far too squishy to ever be feared." White.
Old Posted 09-24-2010, 09:15 AM Reply With Quote  
Default   #6   Jessibuns Jessibuns is offline
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Thanks everyone.
(:
she/her they/them
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Old Posted 09-24-2010, 01:41 PM Reply With Quote  
Bookworm_Ninja Bookworm_Ninja is offline
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Beautifully haunting, conveys wonder to me :) always a good poem when you can sense the emotions
Old Posted 09-24-2010, 10:32 PM Reply With Quote  
Default   #8   Jessibuns Jessibuns is offline
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Glad you like it.
(:
she/her they/them
old queer
Old Posted 09-27-2010, 06:32 PM Reply With Quote  
Rave Rave is offline
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I love the simplicity. A lot of people try to hard to complicate poetry. But I think the emotion is conveyed very well and it's definitely striking.
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