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Default They Will Drown [[Morgan's Poetry]]   #1  
So you guys get the idea, I'm going to post here my random forays into the world of poetry, I certainly hope you enjoy.
Comfort always made the rescue, we always hoped "for the best". I'll burn this with torches, and drown in my consideration
"You are far too squishy to ever be feared." White.
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Beyond the Blacktop

The sun's so vengeful now,
Stuck here in this town,
Like you and me.
Pinned so quietly
To this.
Follow the lines
decode the signs.
Pinpoint our location
South of twisted motivation
and North of all we knew.
Here's where we are,
Where we've been,
And where we're running to.
Comfort always made the rescue, we always hoped "for the best". I'll burn this with torches, and drown in my consideration
"You are far too squishy to ever be feared." White.
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I always love that poem... You know why. x]

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Wanderlust

Upping and downing
Upon the darkest sea
The Bravest Sailor
Is looking out for me

I'm all mixed up
And so messed down
There the stars above
Hold me to the ground

And I don't want to leave
'Cause I know not where to go
With blackened eyes I grieve
and nothing left to show

The ripples here distort
The beauty of it all
And here am I ignoring
The handsome sailor's call
Comfort always made the rescue, we always hoped "for the best". I'll burn this with torches, and drown in my consideration
"You are far too squishy to ever be feared." White.
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Thank you White <3, I like it too. I finally named the second one after much thought
Comfort always made the rescue, we always hoped "for the best". I'll burn this with torches, and drown in my consideration
"You are far too squishy to ever be feared." White.
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Oooooo. Yes. That's a good title. <3

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Hey now, I really enjoyed both of those pieces. Thank you for sharing them with us.
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Thank ya m'am, =] and thank you very much for reading them, you have made my day!
Comfort always made the rescue, we always hoped "for the best". I'll burn this with torches, and drown in my consideration
"You are far too squishy to ever be feared." White.
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Your poems will definitely be read here. xD

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Inches From.

"Seventy-fold times seven,"
says he whose heart is filled
With raging violent passion
For those of us strong-willed

There is easy pain in breathing
and sorrow on our lips
we tempt the taunting blade
with calloused fingertips

A broken record lulls
its quiet broken tune
floating out the door
of the silent Dying Room

He is floating in a sea
Of medical machine
He draws another breath
Here the closing scene

A vacant crowd is standing
about the silver bed
they glance into his pockets
ignoring what he said

They are waiting, only waiting
For the ceasing of his breath
They are fighting, always fighting
For the moment of his death
Comfort always made the rescue, we always hoped "for the best". I'll burn this with torches, and drown in my consideration
"You are far too squishy to ever be feared." White.
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I love that. It makes me sad... But lately anything that has to do with death makes me sad... You know?

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I'm envious of the rhyming. I'm not very good at getting poetry to rhyme.
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She has an obsession with couplets.

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Well,she's very good at it. I encourage the obsession.
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As do I. ;P I've been reading her stuff lately... When I'm not lazy. I have this thing where I only read my own amateur writing. XD

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Well the two of you have spurred me to write. Let's see if I can pen something before the day is out
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