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DaveStrider · Posted 02-13-2013, 12:54 AM

cant even see me
visions red
cant even hear me
sound is dead
time twist
time turn
time and space from all sides
time up
time down
time to take you on a ride

yo backwards forwards
up and down
dead
alive
this is my sound
alpha
beta
omega
rhyme

you cant even handle me
this is my sine

Xyphlan · Posted 02-20-2013, 01:34 AM

Might these be song lyrics, by chance? I got that impression of them. And I'm always a fan of references to math.

littl3chocobo · Posted 02-20-2013, 02:49 AM

i assume this is free-verse correct? it does not actually rhyme so i am not sure that is what you intended but it almost feels like it ought to

DaveStrider Harmless		sick fires	#1
	cant even see me visions red cant even hear me sound is dead time twist time turn time and space from all sides time up time down time to take you on a ride yo backwards forwards up and down dead alive this is my sound alpha beta omega rhyme you cant even handle me this is my sine
		Posted 02-13-2013, 12:54 AM

		#2	Xyphlan Lazy
Might these be song lyrics, by chance? I got that impression of them. And I'm always a fan of references to math. In all likelihood, you just read a clunky wall of text. There's no need for me to make you read even more in my signature.
	Posted 02-20-2013, 01:34 AM

littl3chocobo isn't that funny			#3
	i assume this is free-verse correct? it does not actually rhyme so i am not sure that is what you intended but it almost feels like it ought to come chat with me! http://trisphee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=5267
		Posted 02-20-2013, 02:49 AM

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