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Espy
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Musings of Espy. Potentially best served with rueful solipsistic laughter. No longer updated on front page.
Last edited by Espy; 12-14-2015 at 04:21 AM.
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Posted 10-03-2010, 12:31 AM |
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This one I did for school. Hehe~ Bonus points for guessing which poet I'm imitating.
Last edited by Espy; 08-05-2016 at 11:43 AM.
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Posted 10-03-2010, 12:31 AM |
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Creative Writing class stuff:
worlds. (Had to include three words chosen from a classmate's list of favorite words.) "worlds" was meant to be read in one breath and really quickly. Unfortunately my teacher didn't quite like my tongue's speeding. little lies. (For this one, we took one line from a classmate from the above exercise and used it as the first of a six-line poem.) underwater. (A "response" to Sharon Olds's "The One Girl at the Boys Party", written from a different point of view.) it's got a cubic shit-ton of math references, almost one on every line. Punch (Much different from my usual poetry. We had to take a cliche, chosen at random, and create a poem revolving around it. This one's not as dark as the others, and silly bordering on ridiculous. It's got a tacky rhythm too. More practice with alliteration and assonance.) masks (Written for a slam poetry competition in the CWrit class. It's a group poem, hence the three-line series.)
Last edited by Espy; 10-15-2011 at 10:45 PM.
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Posted 10-03-2010, 12:33 AM |
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War tomorrow (based off and quoting from Macbeth; done as an impromptu response to Funkduder's poems, haha...) STONEWALL WAS A RIOT
Last edited by Espy; 10-31-2011 at 12:23 AM.
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Posted 10-03-2010, 12:33 AM |
With The Current
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I agree, the first one is nice
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Posted 02-13-2011, 12:12 AM |
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-kicks the thread- Updated. Will add more later.
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Posted 09-30-2011, 02:39 AM |
DarkForbidden-Love
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I liked "Worlds" and "Little Lies" Tried two different speeds on "Worlds" and thought it sounded better when read slowly.
Puppy to Asami Gallagher is Nursy~ Broken Muse is my girlfriend And Ducky is awesome! Quote:
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Posted 09-30-2011, 10:01 PM |
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Ah, really? Didn't plan for it to be that way, but reading it again, I see what you mean, it's better slower. Whoops >.>
And thanks :) STONEWALL WAS A RIOT | ||||
Posted 10-01-2011, 12:30 AM |
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Updated again. I really should post stuff other than my poetry, but I doubt anyone wants to read a six-page story.
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Posted 10-01-2011, 05:30 PM |
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DarkForbidden-Love
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Sorry for nitpicking your work but I so like the new poems. 'Punch' was funny even if not you normal style. Puppy to Asami Gallagher is Nursy~ Broken Muse is my girlfriend And Ducky is awesome! Quote:
Last edited by DarkForbidden-Love; 10-01-2011 at 06:43 PM.
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Posted 10-01-2011, 06:29 PM |
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Fixed; it now reads "in the effort to not slip". My recent poems don't have any capitalization, except for Punch. Dunno why.
And thanks again >__< STONEWALL WAS A RIOT | ||||
Posted 10-01-2011, 06:41 PM |
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Quiet Man Cometh
We're all mad here.
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The second one is irritatingly familiar but the precise answer isn't coming. Shot in the dark and say Johnathan Swift?
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Posted 10-02-2011, 07:30 AM |
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Your shot was amazingly accurate >.> -hugs- Yeah, Swift, an assignment last year.
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Posted 10-02-2011, 01:04 PM |
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Quiet Man Cometh
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Heh. He's the first one I thought of when I think sarcasm, so I suppose it was a shot in the dark against someone talking ;). "The Lady's Dressing Room", perchance?
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Posted 10-03-2011, 12:04 AM |
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