[littl3chocobo]

doing ok and breaking into song XD you?

[Espy]

CHOCO. YOU. YOU DRAW. So you know proportions and shading, yeah?

[littl3chocobo]

my knowledge of proportions exceeds my skill at drawing them but i cannot shade for shit even on my best day XD

[Espy]

-groans- Would you be able to tell if shading's off?

[littl3chocobo]

well yes XD that is common sense

[Espy]

Then can I drop something off in here and go to sleep and see what you can critique on it tomorrow? I already can't grammar.

[littl3chocobo]

sure sweetie just give me the perimeters of what i should comment on

[Espy]

This mess because I finally had time to draw.

Just like...the face shading, if anything is fundamentally /wrong/. It's hard to tell, I think, because it's still in block form and might actually stay like that, but...yeah.

[Poggio]

@Espy: Can I have a friend critique it as well?

[Espy]

Sure. It's a really rough WIP, and I'm really too exhausted to have drawn particularly well XD

Nighty night, and danke.

[littl3chocobo]

oh crud XD i might need to get out the red pen, yeah there are some issues with it

[Poggio]

WAIT ESPY, what program are you using? Illustrator or photoshop?
And are you trying to make a graphic image or something rendered?

[Ultima]

Originally Posted by Espy

This mess because I finally had time to draw.

Just like...the face shading, if anything is fundamentally /wrong/. It's hard to tell, I think, because it's still in block form and might actually stay like that, but...yeah.

Ulti can critique too? o3o

The shading for the cheekbone is too low. As you can see here:

the shading starts up by the top of the ear like this:

I think that is the main thing off about it. Other than that, I think it looks good ^^

[littl3chocobo]

poggers XD what is this an art school? hahahaha

[Ultima]

I understood exactly what she said o.o

[littl3chocobo]

no, pog's hair X''D