[Suzerain of Sheol]

Don't mind me, I'm an English major who despises literature and literary theory; I tend to say to Hell with the rules more often than not, and if some elitist academic in an ivory tower has a problem with it, to Hell with them too. >_>

*ahem* Sorry. Anyway, not offended, though if you want people to comment on your own poetry, it would be a good idea to make your own topic rather than post it in someone else's, you're likely to get more attention that way.