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Default   #224   Kaderin Triste Kaderin Triste is offline
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The plot/story, itself, has promise, but it just really needed a lot of editing first.

Not everyone is a particular about grammar and punctuation as I am, though, so today's average reader may not notice it as much as I do.
Old Posted 09-01-2020, 09:15 PM Reply With Quote