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littl3chocobo littl3chocobo is offline
isn't that funny
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unfortunately there are a couple things, it is riddled with typos and changes in tense, and the sentences got a little harder to read as well

i forgot to mention i am a little dyslexic so if a sentence is not clear i can end up messing up quite badly(i read as often as not by reorganizing sentences to make sense so errors throw me)
Old Posted 05-03-2013, 02:01 AM Reply With Quote