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Lawtan's Literature (for Critique)
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Quiet Man Cometh
We're all mad here.
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You did get the 'epic' feel down, I think. Whenever I see things that looks like free verse I immediately read to see if it falls into the "prose with line breaks" trap, which you don't do here, so kudos to you for that. :).
Tea?
Posted 11-19-2013, 02:09 AM