[Quiet Man Cometh]

A couple comments here on your last bit of writing. Hope they help a little bit. :)

Originally Posted by Lawtan

...One would not have expected the void of warmth the air possessed this morning, except for the tile floor.

Watch your word order. Here, I assume you mean to say that the day looks warm but the tile floor is cold. However, it reads as though the tile floor expected the cold weather.

I opened the see-through door with a creeeak,

When you're writing sounds (which I assume is what you are doing here) consider putting the word in italics or putting asterisks around it. As it is, it looks like you just spelled the word wrong. Not a big mistake, but looks unprofessional.

Not much else to say otherwise.