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Suzerain of Sheol Suzerain of Sheol is offline
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I seem to have found the solution. All thanks to your unwavering faith in me. ;)



Is meant to be read in alphabetical order by columns, but you can always try it other ways too. :p

I'm strongly considering cutting the last W stanza, as I think the V stanza ends it much better.

Edit: I see errors already. X__X Oh, well, spotted them in time for class at least.
Cold silence has a tendency
to atrophy any sense of compassion
between supposed lovers.
Between supposed brothers.
Old Posted 02-18-2012, 08:08 PM Reply With Quote